Instant Connection
6 line poem8 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a much better image than the cliche' "love at first sight...across a crowded room. This would make a lovely painting with the animation depicted. And one of you was weak-kneed. The tone of this could go either way; tender or schmaltzy. It probably would depend upon the readers perspective.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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This is a much better image than the cliche' "love at first sight...across a crowded room. This would make a lovely painting with the animation depicted. And one of you was weak-kneed. The tone of this could go either way; tender or schmaltzy. It probably would depend upon the readers perspective.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a strong entry for the Six Line Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed reading this poem. I hope it does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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This is a strong entry for the Six Line Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed reading this poem. I hope it does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Wonderful entry for the Emotions writing prompt contest. Nice presentation.
- I like the short poetic form, it is one of my favorites. -
-love is a very especial emotion...good choice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Hello anonymous
Wonderful entry for the Emotions writing prompt contest. Nice presentation.
- I like the short poetic form, it is one of my favorites. -
-love is a very especial emotion...good choice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great 6 line contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the color scheme, the image, the formatting of your lines, and the message--it is all clear and positive--nice to read. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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This is a great 6 line contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the color scheme, the image, the formatting of your lines, and the message--it is all clear and positive--nice to read. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review Jan. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from roof35
You have described love at first sight in six lines and is not really easy to do. I guess the flower is for your new love. I would mention the blue print on the purple background is a little hard to read. I had to squint.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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You have described love at first sight in six lines and is not really easy to do. I guess the flower is for your new love. I would mention the blue print on the purple background is a little hard to read. I had to squint.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Adore this Six line poem writing prompt contest;-) Good luck in this contest!
Loved your background, font and picture that brought it all home together;-)
I appreciate and thank you for sharing this lovely piece and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Adore this Six line poem writing prompt contest;-) Good luck in this contest!
Loved your background, font and picture that brought it all home together;-)
I appreciate and thank you for sharing this lovely piece and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-line poem. An instant connection with someone dear means the love in you glows to them and you are connected instantly and forever.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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A very well-written six-line poem. An instant connection with someone dear means the love in you glows to them and you are connected instantly and forever.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Earl Corp
Your poem conveys your words very well. The problem I have is with the way you have it formatted to make it six lines. It doesn't read smoothly with it cutting a thought in half. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Your poem conveys your words very well. The problem I have is with the way you have it formatted to make it six lines. It doesn't read smoothly with it cutting a thought in half. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
