Second Chances
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- you started out life with a resounding entrance didn't you?!! ;) Second chances is something we all have had and we just need to remember them when we're at out 'wit's end' with others... :) :) Yvette*
*Please forgive the tardiness on my reviews (as well as this cut/paste addendum) - I've allotted myself some 'catch up' time today, and I'm trying to get 'read up' on as many as possible, but my fingers aren't nearly as speedy as my brain and the clock would like them to be! ;) LOL!
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Wow -- you started out life with a resounding entrance didn't you?!! ;) Second chances is something we all have had and we just need to remember them when we're at out 'wit's end' with others... :) :) Yvette*
*Please forgive the tardiness on my reviews (as well as this cut/paste addendum) - I've allotted myself some 'catch up' time today, and I'm trying to get 'read up' on as many as possible, but my fingers aren't nearly as speedy as my brain and the clock would like them to be! ;) LOL!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
Comment from Alchera
Well written throughout the examples given and of the luck opportunity. It really would be nice to have at our disposal a certain fixed number of lucky occasions in our life but this often doesn't happen. I'll wait for the next ones arriving. Good work indeed! (Since that day we been best friends. Since that day we have been best friends.)
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Well written throughout the examples given and of the luck opportunity. It really would be nice to have at our disposal a certain fixed number of lucky occasions in our life but this often doesn't happen. I'll wait for the next ones arriving. Good work indeed! (Since that day we been best friends. Since that day we have been best friends.)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
Comment from Mastery
I absolutely love the way you started this story off, Iza. You have a wonderful sense of humor that comes through to the reader loud and clear even though you are subtle with some of it:
"I should have been dead after my spectacular landing on the floor. See, it comes handy to have an NFL receiver as a doctor. "
Good write, my friend. I enjoyed it. :) Bob
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I absolutely love the way you started this story off, Iza. You have a wonderful sense of humor that comes through to the reader loud and clear even though you are subtle with some of it:
"I should have been dead after my spectacular landing on the floor. See, it comes handy to have an NFL receiver as a doctor. "
Good write, my friend. I enjoyed it. :) Bob
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
Comment from estory
I like this personal story of these defining moments in life, this moment when your father hangs you in a coat in the closet was really precious. I can't imagine what that must have been like! And the scene when your mother pulls you up from the water is another one of those moments when life flashes before your eyes without your knowing it. Kids are so immune from these things. estory
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I like this personal story of these defining moments in life, this moment when your father hangs you in a coat in the closet was really precious. I can't imagine what that must have been like! And the scene when your mother pulls you up from the water is another one of those moments when life flashes before your eyes without your knowing it. Kids are so immune from these things. estory
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent job! I enjoyed this small story and I can't wait for the second part to come out;-) You were such a mess as a little girl, Lol ... I loved it!
I appreciate and thank you so much for sharing and many blessings to you;-)
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Excellent job! I enjoyed this small story and I can't wait for the second part to come out;-) You were such a mess as a little girl, Lol ... I loved it!
I appreciate and thank you so much for sharing and many blessings to you;-)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
Comment from royowen
An excellent episode and entertaining post, there are some giant waves here in the local Australian seas my friend. Thanks for writing and keeping up with the news. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : You know, I was supposed to (have been) dead. 2: Suddenly a wave (snapped) me... Snatched? 2: That (all) she could see
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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An excellent episode and entertaining post, there are some giant waves here in the local Australian seas my friend. Thanks for writing and keeping up with the news. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : You know, I was supposed to (have been) dead. 2: Suddenly a wave (snapped) me... Snatched? 2: That (all) she could see
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review and corrections.
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My pleasure
Comment from DeboraDyess
Hi Iza! What a fun read. And what adventures you had as a little nugget. :)
Some things to consider...
For example when I was >> For example, when I was
I supposed to be >> I (was/should have been) dead >> Yikes!
See it comes handy to have an NFL, receiver as a doctor >> See, it comes in handy to have an NFL receiver as a doctor. >> LOL
I cried so loud, that I scared >> I cried so loud that I scared
He was working in shifts and every time he was coming home from a night shift, I decided that is time to >> He worked in shifts and every time he came home from a night shift, I decided that was time to >> Poor Dad! lol
day we become best friends. >> Oh, that's hilarious! >> day we have been best friends.
See since there the water was my favorite place to be. >> See, since then the water was my favorite place to be.
What a fun recollection for us to enjoy with you. :)
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Hi Iza! What a fun read. And what adventures you had as a little nugget. :)
Some things to consider...
For example when I was >> For example, when I was
I supposed to be >> I (was/should have been) dead >> Yikes!
See it comes handy to have an NFL, receiver as a doctor >> See, it comes in handy to have an NFL receiver as a doctor. >> LOL
I cried so loud, that I scared >> I cried so loud that I scared
He was working in shifts and every time he was coming home from a night shift, I decided that is time to >> He worked in shifts and every time he came home from a night shift, I decided that was time to >> Poor Dad! lol
day we become best friends. >> Oh, that's hilarious! >> day we have been best friends.
See since there the water was my favorite place to be. >> See, since then the water was my favorite place to be.
What a fun recollection for us to enjoy with you. :)
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Hi Deb, thank you so much for your wonderful review and the grammar corrections.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a very interesting nonfiction story to follow. You sure survived some harrowing experiences as a child, which probably scared your parents to death.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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This is a very interesting nonfiction story to follow. You sure survived some harrowing experiences as a child, which probably scared your parents to death.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you:)
