Failure is Part of Life
Turning failures into something productive.3 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO POET: I was raised being taught that..."If at first...I don't succeed...try, try again." That stuck with me until today. Today this is what I've learnt from that motto. "Our Lord is with the brokenhearted. He saves those of us, whose spirits have been wounded." To me...that means...We may have been pressed...but we have not been crushed. Because He loves us...our Lord will not let that happen to us. Thank you, Jesus. God bless you, poet. Ciao. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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CIAO POET: I was raised being taught that..."If at first...I don't succeed...try, try again." That stuck with me until today. Today this is what I've learnt from that motto. "Our Lord is with the brokenhearted. He saves those of us, whose spirits have been wounded." To me...that means...We may have been pressed...but we have not been crushed. Because He loves us...our Lord will not let that happen to us. Thank you, Jesus. God bless you, poet. Ciao. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
Comment from jaded831
Great free verse, each line flows nicely into the next. Unfortunately I'm one of the mopers, I've lost my zip, because of one to many failures. But I'm changing my mind set. I needed your motivation.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Great free verse, each line flows nicely into the next. Unfortunately I'm one of the mopers, I've lost my zip, because of one to many failures. But I'm changing my mind set. I needed your motivation.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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I tend to mope too.. ( sigh)
I was going to make 2020 my year of change but convid and lockdown changed all that ..
I just don t want my enthusiasm to fizzle out in the meantime..
so I thought to refresh my mind about failure and how to turn it into a positive thing.
Thank you for reviewing my entry , glad you enjoyed the read !
I wish you success in your next endeavour ..( smile)
Keep safe!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nice entry for the prompt. I hope you to well.
It gives good advice. Use failure as a stepping stone to success and then your won't loose self-confidence.
The last line in the first stanza doesn't seem to be grammatically correct or seem to fit the rhythm.
May be it can be It will struggle and soon will rise
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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This is a nice entry for the prompt. I hope you to well.
It gives good advice. Use failure as a stepping stone to success and then your won't loose self-confidence.
The last line in the first stanza doesn't seem to be grammatically correct or seem to fit the rhythm.
May be it can be It will struggle and soon will rise
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the positive response ..yes there was a typo ..
I edited : eventual to eventually .. I think now it is grammatically okay
Thank you for your help
Keep safe!
