Island Getaway
5-7-5 entry3 total reviews
Comment from Rbrendaartwork18
A limited rendition but comes over and very understandable. That location?? Well I spent 2 months of lockdown in it. Not pinacolados, but red wine or saveja the local beer.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
A limited rendition but comes over and very understandable. That location?? Well I spent 2 months of lockdown in it. Not pinacolados, but red wine or saveja the local beer.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you! Glad you could relate to this short piece.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece a lot. It's very true and also very current. I think it will appeal to a lot of folk right now. Syllable count is spot on, too.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
Hi there,
I liked this piece a lot. It's very true and also very current. I think it will appeal to a lot of folk right now. Syllable count is spot on, too.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you! Glad you could relate to this piece. I picture myself sipping pina coladas on an island...quite often these days!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Great entry in this 5-7-5 contest, one of the best I read so far.I liked the whole idea, the humor and wit of it, the picture and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
Great entry in this 5-7-5 contest, one of the best I read so far.I liked the whole idea, the humor and wit of it, the picture and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!