Reception In High Places
5-7-5 Witty animal - being nosey.14 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
I wish I had seen this earlier, so I could have voted for it; what a brilliant write! I have read most of the entries and by far, this is an outstanding poem and should have won hands down.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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I wish I had seen this earlier, so I could have voted for it; what a brilliant write! I have read most of the entries and by far, this is an outstanding poem and should have won hands down.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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You made my day with your wonderfully positive review. Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, Ha, funny little poem and quite majestic:) "Bow wow, Your Highness.
I'll take a sniff of your whiff,
then I will butt out." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Ha, ha, Ha, funny little poem and quite majestic:) "Bow wow, Your Highness.
I'll take a sniff of your whiff,
then I will butt out." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
Your entry certainly meets all the criteria for the contest!
Bad taste or not it made me laugh :D
Fun word play and nice internal rhyme in line 2.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Hello :)
Your entry certainly meets all the criteria for the contest!
Bad taste or not it made me laugh :D
Fun word play and nice internal rhyme in line 2.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Probably a laugh of disgust! Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written whitty animal 5-7-5 about the dog's habits that seem disgusting to us are quite natural to them and their only way to greet others and find out what their character is.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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A very well-written whitty animal 5-7-5 about the dog's habits that seem disgusting to us are quite natural to them and their only way to greet others and find out what their character is.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
What is appealing to some is disgusting to others. It takes all types.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Repulsive presentation.
It's funny but in bad taste...most people will like it.
Well done!
Peace be with you,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Repulsive presentation.
It's funny but in bad taste...most people will like it.
Well done!
Peace be with you,
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. What is appealing to some is disgusting to others. It takes all types.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an unusual thought for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is an unusual thought for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I think this poem stinks! Thanks for reviewing it.
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Ha ha
Comment from amada
For sure this 5-7-5 original 5-7-5 poem make me laugh, i almost spilled my coffee. Your lines are short but pungent, different to all the others 5-7-5 club. I hope it does very well in the contest. Highly original.
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For sure this 5-7-5 original 5-7-5 poem make me laugh, i almost spilled my coffee. Your lines are short but pungent, different to all the others 5-7-5 club. I hope it does very well in the contest. Highly original.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A witty animal 5-7-5? Look no further! Here it is.
Really funny, text, picture, everything! Where did you find this hilarious picture? It is perfectly matching the text for your little poem.
Well done! It will win the contest, I am sure.
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A witty animal 5-7-5? Look no further! Here it is.
Really funny, text, picture, everything! Where did you find this hilarious picture? It is perfectly matching the text for your little poem.
Well done! It will win the contest, I am sure.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is very funny and I have read a few of these contest entries this morning and so far you have me rolling with laughter, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, this is very funny and I have read a few of these contest entries this morning and so far you have me rolling with laughter, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
On-point humor for us dog owners--The photo is priceless! Clever use of sniff/whiff and wordplay with butt out. This may be a winner--good luck. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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On-point humor for us dog owners--The photo is priceless! Clever use of sniff/whiff and wordplay with butt out. This may be a winner--good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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That photo's a shocker... I hope the big dog farts and teaches the little feller not to be quite SO nosey.
I think some people will think it is in bad taste. (Even I do.)
