Cat
A Pleiades 7-line poem14 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a cutie she is and she knows just where the camera was when her picture was taken. You handled the prompt well. Your lines/words flow smoothly with great imagery. Even if no picture had been included, I could see her as I read your sweet poem. She knows she was given a second chance when she adopted you. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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What a cutie she is and she knows just where the camera was when her picture was taken. You handled the prompt well. Your lines/words flow smoothly with great imagery. Even if no picture had been included, I could see her as I read your sweet poem. She knows she was given a second chance when she adopted you. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from Irene Bratton
This is so sweet. The lines of your poem flow smoothly from one to the next and the background color really makes your cat stand out. She's gorgeous. I have a solid gray cat with bright green eyes. He's quite a character but I suppose they all are. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is so sweet. The lines of your poem flow smoothly from one to the next and the background color really makes your cat stand out. She's gorgeous. I have a solid gray cat with bright green eyes. He's quite a character but I suppose they all are. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Your cat sounds gorgeous! I had a grey cat once - A British Blue - he was a character too. My kitten has loads of personality.
Thanks for your nice comments about my poem.
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Teri7
What a beautiful little kitten. You have written a very nice poem for the Pleiades writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery with the picture of this lovely kitten. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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What a beautiful little kitten. You have written a very nice poem for the Pleiades writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery with the picture of this lovely kitten. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thanks Teri. She kept trying to play while I was writing the poem.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
How I love your picture and the words to accompany it:"Curious, cheeky, displaying her charms
Confirming me caught in her calming gaze
Cuddlesome bundle now purrs in my arms
"Thank you for sharing purr, purr and good look with the contest.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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How I love your picture and the words to accompany it:"Curious, cheeky, displaying her charms
Confirming me caught in her calming gaze
Cuddlesome bundle now purrs in my arms
"Thank you for sharing purr, purr and good look with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review, Iza. Writing the poem was rather difficult with the cat wanting to play all the time.
