Life's Direction
Surprise Me Story Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
What a philosophical rebel! until "out of the mouths" of proverbial babes (at Walmart) I loved the cave in when challenged: "Suprise!" This was a great story. I loved the internal ravings, inner workings, then to be tripped up by the obvious. Good Story!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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What a philosophical rebel! until "out of the mouths" of proverbial babes (at Walmart) I loved the cave in when challenged: "Suprise!" This was a great story. I loved the internal ravings, inner workings, then to be tripped up by the obvious. Good Story!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Beverly. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a wonderful week.
Ron
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Thank you, you're quite welcome!
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, those pesky new rules. Early on, you say you 'hated myself', but then you go on to contradict that assertion. 'I blatantly disregarded the woeful feelings of others'. Sounds defiant, rather than contrite. Just an observation.
Peace, Lee
Undeniable hatred permeated from their auras.--perhaps you mean 'exuded' or 'oozed' instead of 'permeated'?
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Ah, those pesky new rules. Early on, you say you 'hated myself', but then you go on to contradict that assertion. 'I blatantly disregarded the woeful feelings of others'. Sounds defiant, rather than contrite. Just an observation.
Peace, Lee
Undeniable hatred permeated from their auras.--perhaps you mean 'exuded' or 'oozed' instead of 'permeated'?
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thanks for the great review and generous stars, Lee. Yeah, I just look at it as he can hate himself and be an ass at the same time. "Permeated" just flew over my head. Duh! Thanks for the fix. I changed it. I appreciate the help and have a great day.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent job! Your story is creative and interesting and kept me wanting to know what was next;-) Totally surprise ending and perfect for the contest;-)
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Good luck with the contest;-)
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Excellent job! Your story is creative and interesting and kept me wanting to know what was next;-) Totally surprise ending and perfect for the contest;-)
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Good luck with the contest;-)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Melodie. I appreciate your gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day.
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