Welcome Summer Rain Arrives
Dedicated to those with farm backgrounds13 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
hi there
ah yes ... the best rain raineth every day ... so Shakespeare wrote and who am I to disagree. I live downtown in a big but I have fond memories of the many summers I spent on a REAL farm.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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hi there
ah yes ... the best rain raineth every day ... so Shakespeare wrote and who am I to disagree. I live downtown in a big but I have fond memories of the many summers I spent on a REAL farm.
/ Lobber
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for sharing my pm. I hope it brought back some fond memories of your summers on a farm.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your twenty-line poem is skillfully-written, appealing, and vividly descriptive of the workings of the farm and the effects of the much-welcomed rain. I especially like the simile in stanza 1. :-)
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Your twenty-line poem is skillfully-written, appealing, and vividly descriptive of the workings of the farm and the effects of the much-welcomed rain. I especially like the simile in stanza 1. :-)
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing my poem, Jan, and your kind praise. I am very pleased you like my simile.
Comment from Rubypond
I really enjoyed this! Nice rhythm and flow and great meter throughout. I wonder is this a particular form or structure? Also really loved the painting!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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I really enjoyed this! Nice rhythm and flow and great meter throughout. I wonder is this a particular form or structure? Also really loved the painting!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Wow! I am thrilled you enjoyed my poem so much, Rubypond. No, this is not a particular form, just quatrains written in iambic tetrameter. Many thanks for your high praise and those six bright stars.
