Moon Rises
A Rondel for the contest9 total reviews
Comment from R. Hiland
Wow! It even makes sense as a Poem! Good rhymes, good images, a consistent sweet emotion running through, metrically consistent--- I'm impressed that you could make something tasty out of what I consider a somewhat trivial form. You have made something special out of nothing much. Bravo! Good Job! A+
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Wow! It even makes sense as a Poem! Good rhymes, good images, a consistent sweet emotion running through, metrically consistent--- I'm impressed that you could make something tasty out of what I consider a somewhat trivial form. You have made something special out of nothing much. Bravo! Good Job! A+
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this piece. Trying to capture what August could be like...without Covid.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your well-written poem and I really like your visual art. It enhanced your message. I liked how you wrote about all the activities happening on a hot August night, the moon, dancing, music, birds. It is very descriptive. I like it very much. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed reading your well-written poem and I really like your visual art. It enhanced your message. I liked how you wrote about all the activities happening on a hot August night, the moon, dancing, music, birds. It is very descriptive. I like it very much. Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks for dropping by to share your thoughts! Thanks
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Rondel for the contest
Full Moon Rises
Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the
Rondel Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the sound of this kind of poem. You did a great job with it. It will do well in the contest. Wonderful imagery of the moon scene. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Rondel for the contest
Full Moon Rises
Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the
Rondel Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the sound of this kind of poem. You did a great job with it. It will do well in the contest. Wonderful imagery of the moon scene. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine Rondel and you painted a night of magic here, of laughter and fun, of music and celebration, a night to remember, perfect rhymes and flow too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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A fine Rondel and you painted a night of magic here, of laughter and fun, of music and celebration, a night to remember, perfect rhymes and flow too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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So glad you liked this! Thanks for sharing your insights.
Comment from emmaysavage
This poem captures the spirit of the summer night, especially as it's coupled with your art, which generates the idea of heat. I like your first stanza best -- it gtabbed my attention
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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This poem captures the spirit of the summer night, especially as it's coupled with your art, which generates the idea of heat. I like your first stanza best -- it gtabbed my attention
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from trimple
Good evening Mystery writer.
I have never delved into the workings of this particular style of poetry, but having now done so in order to ascertain what's required, I see that you have technicalities correct.
You have set a lovely scene for potential love that's surrounded by night birds... Interesting :)
Fav line is: Let's dance in rhythm with notes that excite
I wish you luck in this competition.
Kindest regards
Trimple
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Good evening Mystery writer.
I have never delved into the workings of this particular style of poetry, but having now done so in order to ascertain what's required, I see that you have technicalities correct.
You have set a lovely scene for potential love that's surrounded by night birds... Interesting :)
Fav line is: Let's dance in rhythm with notes that excite
I wish you luck in this competition.
Kindest regards
Trimple
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
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a pleasure
Comment from Karen Estep
Kudos to you for taking on this type of rhyme, and a great subject! It reminds me of New Orleans. The words flowed beautifully and I could feel the air of summer!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Kudos to you for taking on this type of rhyme, and a great subject! It reminds me of New Orleans. The words flowed beautifully and I could feel the air of summer!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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So glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Lobber
hi there,
i dont know why but August is one of my favourite months, but not so for certain folks, check out my most recent post at https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=988262
- Lobber
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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hi there,
i dont know why but August is one of my favourite months, but not so for certain folks, check out my most recent post at https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=988262
- Lobber
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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I am glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for the generous rating!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is very lovely, romantic, descriptive, and skillfully composed.
The carefree tone and scenario painted are uplifting and enthusiastic, and the artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Your poem is very lovely, romantic, descriptive, and skillfully composed.
The carefree tone and scenario painted are uplifting and enthusiastic, and the artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights!
