If I Am Alone
A spiritual rondeau25 total reviews
Comment from moonsunrise
This is a very beautiful spiritual rondeau. The image is very spiritually uplifting. There is something about being alone and resting in the Lord while thanking him for all He has done in one's life. It's also a time to be still and listen to His voice.
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Thanks very much for sharing. I found myself taking deep breaths while looking at your image selection.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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This is a very beautiful spiritual rondeau. The image is very spiritually uplifting. There is something about being alone and resting in the Lord while thanking him for all He has done in one's life. It's also a time to be still and listen to His voice.
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Thanks very much for sharing. I found myself taking deep breaths while looking at your image selection.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, moonsunrise, for your lovely review. I am so pleased I could put you in that canoe on the lake, giving thanks to the Lord.
Comment from Dick Waters
Rod,
I like the picture your words present and the way you structured the poem.
It must be nice to have this kind of talent.
The actual picture has a great relationship to the poem.
You gave me some ideas about how to make the syllable count work.
Very nice.
Dick
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Rod,
I like the picture your words present and the way you structured the poem.
It must be nice to have this kind of talent.
The actual picture has a great relationship to the poem.
You gave me some ideas about how to make the syllable count work.
Very nice.
Dick
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for the kudos, Dick. I am glad Icould give you some ideas regarding meter.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, such a wonderfully soothing verse with encouragement of self-reflection for the day... A well-written Rondeau!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Oh, such a wonderfully soothing verse with encouragement of self-reflection for the day... A well-written Rondeau!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my rondeau, Yvette. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully honed and written Rondeau, there's been a few of these latelym I thiough I was the only one who wrote these. They take some crafting, because of their quirky differences, but nothing wrong with this one, well dine, beautifully written, with a subject dear to my heart, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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A beautifully honed and written Rondeau, there's been a few of these latelym I thiough I was the only one who wrote these. They take some crafting, because of their quirky differences, but nothing wrong with this one, well dine, beautifully written, with a subject dear to my heart, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Hi Roy. Many thanks for sharing my rondeau. I do not write them often because, like you said, they are challenging. So pleased you enjoyed this one..
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Well done, good job
Comment from mermaids
You create an image that is beautiful, alone and feeling God's presence out in nature. There are also strong feelings in your words, your vivid description of nature makes God come alive. The mention of the lake and the songbirds adds to the spiritual fell of your words.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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You create an image that is beautiful, alone and feeling God's presence out in nature. There are also strong feelings in your words, your vivid description of nature makes God come alive. The mention of the lake and the songbirds adds to the spiritual fell of your words.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, mermaids, for your lovely review of my rondeau. I am thrilled my imagery put you there with the Speaker.
