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Divine Gifts

A Cinquain for the contest

5 total reviews 
Comment from Manh C Dang
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I love this poem! And gave it the 6th vote. It describes God's precious gifts, no matter how small, very well. The photo is perfect for the poem. Good luck in this contest!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2020


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    Thank you!
Comment from Cindy Decker
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This a simple, yet beautiful cinquain poem. The photo of the delicate flower is symbolic of the fragile nature of God's beautiful world. You have the exact syllables for this type of poem. As you say, even the smallest of creation is precious to God.
Excellent word.
Blessings,

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    thank you so much!
Comment from zanya
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Yes such a timely reminder here in this Cinquain that Life is indeed beautiful 'beauty of God's gifts' - not only beautiful but 'precious' also- thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020


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    Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This cinquain, Divine Whispers, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader to listen and look for the elements about us which give proof that God is here with us.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
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Love this, mystery poet. I see God in everything, especially in the beauty of the created world around me. A fine cinquain and hopeful winner for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    I am glad you liked this piece.