Divine Gifts
A Cinquain for the contest5 total reviews
Comment from Manh C Dang
I love this poem! And gave it the 6th vote. It describes God's precious gifts, no matter how small, very well. The photo is perfect for the poem. Good luck in this contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
I love this poem! And gave it the 6th vote. It describes God's precious gifts, no matter how small, very well. The photo is perfect for the poem. Good luck in this contest!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Cindy Decker
This a simple, yet beautiful cinquain poem. The photo of the delicate flower is symbolic of the fragile nature of God's beautiful world. You have the exact syllables for this type of poem. As you say, even the smallest of creation is precious to God.
Excellent word.
Blessings,
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
This a simple, yet beautiful cinquain poem. The photo of the delicate flower is symbolic of the fragile nature of God's beautiful world. You have the exact syllables for this type of poem. As you say, even the smallest of creation is precious to God.
Excellent word.
Blessings,
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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thank you so much!
Comment from zanya
Yes such a timely reminder here in this Cinquain that Life is indeed beautiful 'beauty of God's gifts' - not only beautiful but 'precious' also- thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
Yes such a timely reminder here in this Cinquain that Life is indeed beautiful 'beauty of God's gifts' - not only beautiful but 'precious' also- thanks for sharing
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Divine Whispers, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader to listen and look for the elements about us which give proof that God is here with us.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
This cinquain, Divine Whispers, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader to listen and look for the elements about us which give proof that God is here with us.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
Love this, mystery poet. I see God in everything, especially in the beauty of the created world around me. A fine cinquain and hopeful winner for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
Love this, mystery poet. I see God in everything, especially in the beauty of the created world around me. A fine cinquain and hopeful winner for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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I am glad you liked this piece.