He Hogs The Blankets
Witty animal 5-7-513 total reviews
Comment from gramalot8
I love piggies! Your picture is great! I love how you played around with the words to fit the storyline. Great job and congratulations for winning the contest.
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I love piggies! Your picture is great! I love how you played around with the words to fit the storyline. Great job and congratulations for winning the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This witty animal 5-7-5, He Hogs the Blankets, has the right set up and finds the word play that makes this piece sow funny.
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This witty animal 5-7-5, He Hogs the Blankets, has the right set up and finds the word play that makes this piece sow funny.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very funny poem, boar and hog in the same line of work or of the world. "Please don't take me for grunted". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Very funny poem, boar and hog in the same line of work or of the world. "Please don't take me for grunted". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun write about these fine specimens and I loved the play on words here, an ideal entry for the contest because you made me smile, an amusing post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A fun write about these fine specimens and I loved the play on words here, an ideal entry for the contest because you made me smile, an amusing post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt. Hogs do have their own personalities. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Best of luck to you.
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This is a good entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt. Hogs do have their own personalities. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
Comment from lancellot
Lol, nice play on words at end of your third line. At first my mind read misspelling until I realized I was smiling. Also, good choice of animal. Hogs don't get represented enough on these.
A very strong contender.
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Lol, nice play on words at end of your third line. At first my mind read misspelling until I realized I was smiling. Also, good choice of animal. Hogs don't get represented enough on these.
A very strong contender.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh, groan! That's so funny, in a dad-joke kind of way! I thought I'd picked the one that had my vote, but now ... Loving this!
Well done. Best of luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Oh, groan! That's so funny, in a dad-joke kind of way! I thought I'd picked the one that had my vote, but now ... Loving this!
Well done. Best of luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Those male chauvinist pigs take us women for grunted too often! They should take us out swining and dining more often.
Thank you so much for your vote of confidence in my offering to the contest.
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You were doing well when I voted. Hope you win. :)
Comment from mermaids
You have a clever use of words here. "But he's such a boar" is a fitting last line, it sums up the first two. Excellent use of words that captures the image of the bovine. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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You have a clever use of words here. "But he's such a boar" is a fitting last line, it sums up the first two. Excellent use of words that captures the image of the bovine. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from UpNorth
LOL. Still chuckling--and you used the title to extend/explain the meaning of the poem. Great giggle! Keep writing as humour is not easy in this world of troubles.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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LOL. Still chuckling--and you used the title to extend/explain the meaning of the poem. Great giggle! Keep writing as humour is not easy in this world of troubles.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Poem and artwork make a dynamite pair. You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this descriptive, comical, clever piece--including the pun.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Poem and artwork make a dynamite pair. You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this descriptive, comical, clever piece--including the pun.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
