Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Great job with this witty animal poem. I like your play on words And rhyme. Good luck in the contest. You definitely found the right picture to match your writing. Bill

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020

Thanks for reviewing!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a cute entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest.
The picture is a great match as well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

A wonderful entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.

The boarpig is a good topic. I like the humor and clever double meaning.

Good luck!

Gypsy

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020

Thanks for reviewing!