You Go On
a 5-7-513 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely,
very moving poem. This sounds just like something an excited child would say to his deceased mother.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely,
very moving poem. This sounds just like something an excited child would say to his deceased mother.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Janice
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt 5-7-5 poem about knocking the ball out of the park to impress his mother in heaven who is looking down into. Where he plays in the arena.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt 5-7-5 poem about knocking the ball out of the park to impress his mother in heaven who is looking down into. Where he plays in the arena.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from Sally Law
There is much said in your short verse 5-7-5. Beautifully penned and illustrated. Oh, how we want our departed parents to see these special moments.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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There is much said in your short verse 5-7-5. Beautifully penned and illustrated. Oh, how we want our departed parents to see these special moments.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Sally
