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Small facts from the everyday life

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! There's that tongue-in-cheek pen that I have so missed!! This is a wonderful offering for the day, my lady -- get yourself back studying (lol!) Thanx for sharing your smile! ;) Yvette

special about? --> special about it?

unfair and we can --> unfair, and we can

failures but how --> failures, but how

Take for example myself, instead --> Take for example, myself: instead

morning I'm pushing --> morning, I've been pushing

pm and I have --> pm, and I have

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Hello my dear friend and please forgive me for my delay. I hope you have a fantastic summer:)
Comment from royowen
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Well, with the confession you've made, life isn't responsible for your failure to achieve what you want to achieve, or indeed mine Iza, some people say that one makes their own luck, but in principal there is an element of chance. Beautifully written Iza, blessings Roy
Typo : What's so special about (it)? 2: (he my skip (to) the grocery store guy)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty. Please forgive me for my dealy.
reply by royowen on 06-Aug-2020
    Most welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I agree, Iza. We do have choices and many times we make poor ones, then blame life. It's all a matter of prioritizing what life throws at us. I enjoyed your story. You have a busy life even in lockdown. Those kitties are important--esp. now to help relieve stress. So, dote on them a lot. As for the other 'things,' I'll leave them to you to decide.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much,Jan, for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 06-Aug-2020
    (((HUGS)))
Comment from Mastery
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Hi Iza. Sounds to me like you just wastewd a lot of time. Biggest problem is that *&##@!&*& television! Too much of that will burn a hole in your imagination and thinking processes. Trust me...play the radio instead...good back ground music soothes and entertains while you work or study. : ) Bob

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Mr. Bob, thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty. Please forgive me for my delay in answering your comment.
Comment from estory
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Another witty little post on life. You have a perfect insight here, into the blame game that people play nowadays. everyone blames something or someone else for their problems. It's his fault. Her fault. Your fault. Life's fault. I like the humor woven into your little piece; the procrastination of the exam with the time spent watching TV, or playing with the kitties, or doing chores. We all live like this. estory

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Hi Tony:), and thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
Comment from Phillip Smeal
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I am in awe that this is not your first language. I like the casual turn of phrase you use, "yup the old style, by hand" and then that "love-hate games with my kitties" was just exactly the best way to describe playing with cats. The essence of this piece reminded me a bit of that John Lennon quote about life being "what happens when you're busy making other plans". Thank you for the wisdom

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Wow, Mr. Philip, thank you so much for your precious and encouraging feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Only you can be blamed for how you use (or misuse) your time. I have hundreds of ideas on this subject and ways to control time. I have been trying to collate these into an anthology, but they refuse to conform, at least so far.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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(typo: what's so special about? s/b ...about it?) Clever bit on the perils of procrastination--your time was well-spent--but now it's time to hit the books. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Hi Liz, thank you so much for your feedback and please forgive my delay.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Your pretty on point with your story and excellent job on it!
You clearly have talent;-)

I appreciate your sharing this piece and may God bless you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Hi Melodie, thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 08-Aug-2020
    ;-)
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is a fun read, Iza. By the sounds of it you have mastered the art of dithering quite well, but look at all the other things you accomplished when you should've been studying for your exam. It's all going to come in handy one of these days.

Just one typo here:

( he is my skip the the grocery store guy),

Great job and very readable.

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.