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My Lovey Man

Personification poetry ~ Love

21 total reviews 
Comment from Therese Caron
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This is a happy, funny poem. It is very full of emotion, and the writer obviously cares about the Lovey Man as much as the Lovey Man cares about her. I enjoy the entire poem, but my favorite is the middle stanza. Your image is absolutely perfect to complement the words you chose. Wonderful poem!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
    Thanks so much! So glad you liked it!!!

    Melissa
reply by Therese Caron on 31-Jul-2020
    I really did!
Comment from Dick Narvett
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Love to the rescue in a lighthearted way. Really a poem of two emotions... both love and depression, with love the victor. Refreshing read.
Good luck,
Dick

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
    Thanks so much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Some people are gifted at making others feel good, making them laugh. How wonderful it would be to LIVE with such a person! Your poem is well-written and descriptive.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Thanks so much Janice!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, My Lovely Man, gives the readers a good example of love as produced by a loyal and caring soul who uses all the tools available to maintain and build into a relationship.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from write hand blue
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The picture is amusing and appropriate to the poem.
I enjoyed the read you have carried on with the humour promised in the picture. Not the easiest subject to write about. Good luck. ~Mel~

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Vedika2
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Lovely.
Emotion has personified as love of your life.
Cover is unique and very apt to the title of poem.
Would have love to read more though.
Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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You have great metaphors. This poem has some tongue-in-cheek humor which is needed these days. You have good use of juxtaposition. The alliteration especially the s's effects the sizzling of the fire of the glow. Well thought out.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from papa55mike
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It took many years for him to become your silly clown. My wife can just look at me with her silly look and we bust out laughing. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much Mike!
Comment from poetwatch
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I see where you may love this lovely man, Melissa. :) He is one of a kind as it should be. Many do not understand that for a couple to survive any type of storm they must always try to bring a smile to their partner. Your poem is lovely I like it. :) The picture is worth more than a 1000 words. This is a good entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Thanks so much Jose!!!