Heidi Happy
A personified emotion49 total reviews
Comment from royowen
There's been a few of these emotion personification poems over the years, and I've never tired of them, they bring out all sorts of creative productions. Beautifully written in tetrametric stanzas and abcb rhyming, a smooth, articulate gem, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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There's been a few of these emotion personification poems over the years, and I've never tired of them, they bring out all sorts of creative productions. Beautifully written in tetrametric stanzas and abcb rhyming, a smooth, articulate gem, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Roy, for this exceptional review and praise of my poem.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written poem vividly describes the type of person the world needs more of. They are genuine--because if they were not, sooner or later, people would SEE through their facade.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Your well-written poem vividly describes the type of person the world needs more of. They are genuine--because if they were not, sooner or later, people would SEE through their facade.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Oh, do I agree with you, Janice. The Heidi?s of this world are much too rare. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding writing, Author. You make me want to meet this person. Your images are so realistic that i can visually see her without meeting her however.
"Just watch what happens when she whoops.
Her thick-lashed eyes will quickly close,
and as her mouth expels each note
white teeth--all perfect--she'll expose."
Be prepared because you are going to win this one. :) Bob
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Outstanding writing, Author. You make me want to meet this person. Your images are so realistic that i can visually see her without meeting her however.
"Just watch what happens when she whoops.
Her thick-lashed eyes will quickly close,
and as her mouth expels each note
white teeth--all perfect--she'll expose."
Be prepared because you are going to win this one. :) Bob
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Bob, for your wonderful praise of HEIDI HAPPY and encouragement.
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You are so welcome. Good luck. :) Bob
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great positive poem that is expressed with vivid words for clear images of joy and happiness. This kind of person is a great friend to have. Good luck in the contest. Bill
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Great positive poem that is expressed with vivid words for clear images of joy and happiness. This kind of person is a great friend to have. Good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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I think we all would welcome a friend like Heidi. Many thanks for your high praise of my poem, Bill.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this poem and how it has made the abstract "Ms. Happy" into a real and fresh-blood Ms. Heidi Happy. It used her facial expression, her laughter and humor to achieve this. I can visualize this person.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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I like this poem and how it has made the abstract "Ms. Happy" into a real and fresh-blood Ms. Heidi Happy. It used her facial expression, her laughter and humor to achieve this. I can visualize this person.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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I am thrilled you think the Heidi in my poem is real, Lisa. Many thanks for your very kind praise.
Comment from Rmocruz
You have well personified "Heidi Happy" in solidly rhymed quatrains.
This well described Ms. has much to be happy about. The visual art selection is quite colorful and well compliments your written word.
I enjoyed this enjoyable, promising contest entry.
Best Wishes!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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You have well personified "Heidi Happy" in solidly rhymed quatrains.
This well described Ms. has much to be happy about. The visual art selection is quite colorful and well compliments your written word.
I enjoyed this enjoyable, promising contest entry.
Best Wishes!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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I am so pleased you enjoyed meeting Heidi. Many thanks for your very kind praise of my poem.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Vanna1
Good presentation. Nice poem. Good rhyming as well. I like the interesting ?French? wording at the end... thanks for the notes. Good luck in the contest. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Good presentation. Nice poem. Good rhyming as well. I like the interesting ?French? wording at the end... thanks for the notes. Good luck in the contest. Happy writing!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my poem and my use of a French phrase (about the only one I. Know). Rod
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Heidi Happy", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. With craft and skill this talented poet has told it as she/he sees it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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"Heidi Happy", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. With craft and skill this talented poet has told it as she/he sees it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Duchess, for your kind praise of my poem. Rod
Rod, as always, you're very welcome.
God bless you, take care and keep sharing!
the Duchess
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Rod, as always, you're very welcome.
God bless, take care and keep sharing!
the Duchess
Comment from Bill Schott
This is an excellent example of emotions personification. HeidiHappy helps me envision the humor and gaiety that is suddenly filling a room When the right person arrives.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent example of emotions personification. HeidiHappy helps me envision the humor and gaiety that is suddenly filling a room When the right person arrives.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Heidi is one of those special people. I am so pleased you enjoyed meeting her, Bill.
Comment from write hand blue
I like this poem it brings on the joys of life. The the rhyming scheme suits the style and content. An abstract picture attenuates the best features which are well portrayed in this pleasing write.
There's another reason why I like it. I'm reminded of a deceased aunt who was described perfectly in your poem, and picture, she lit up a room when she walked in. Good luck in the prompt. ~Mel~
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I like this poem it brings on the joys of life. The the rhyming scheme suits the style and content. An abstract picture attenuates the best features which are well portrayed in this pleasing write.
There's another reason why I like it. I'm reminded of a deceased aunt who was described perfectly in your poem, and picture, she lit up a room when she walked in. Good luck in the prompt. ~Mel~
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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You were so lucky, Mel, to have an aunt like Heidi. I am delighted my poem brought back fond memories. Many thanks for your kind praise and all those bright stars. Rod
