Heidi Happy
A personified emotion49 total reviews
Comment from rhymelord
Dear poe,
One of the better "traditional" poems I have read in a long time on this site. I am particularly impressed by the perfect metre (to my end the essence of any good poem) and the rhymes are strong and true. A happy little subject makes reading a pleasure.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Dear poe,
One of the better "traditional" poems I have read in a long time on this site. I am particularly impressed by the perfect metre (to my end the essence of any good poem) and the rhymes are strong and true. A happy little subject makes reading a pleasure.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Reg, for the high praise of my rhythm and rhymes and all those bright stars. Heidi thanks you, too. Rod
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I am flattered you found my poem ?unique and creative,? Rebecca. Heidi was fun to bring to life and I?m thrilled so many readers like her. Rod
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Maybe you could start a series on her...
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your Personification of the emotion happy. Your poem rhymes well and flows well with happiness. I also like your artwork choice, which enhances your message of happiness. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed reading your Personification of the emotion happy. Your poem rhymes well and flows well with happiness. I also like your artwork choice, which enhances your message of happiness. Best wishes!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I am very pleased you think my poem ?flows well with happiness,? angel123. I did choose iambic meter to mimic Heidi?s laughter. Rod
Comment from tfawcus
A refreshingly upbeat poem. We could do with cloning this lovely lady. The world could do with more characters like Miss Heidi Happy. A splendidly rhythmic offering to launch her into our lives. Bravo!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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A refreshingly upbeat poem. We could do with cloning this lovely lady. The world could do with more characters like Miss Heidi Happy. A splendidly rhythmic offering to launch her into our lives. Bravo!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hi, Tony. I agree that the world would benefit from lots of Heidi Happys. Thank you for your very kind praise. Rod
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Nice rhymes
flows well
stays on point with respect to story-line
Particularly love this line:
She has that rarest spark of life
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Nice rhymes
flows well
stays on point with respect to story-line
Particularly love this line:
She has that rarest spark of life
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I am delighted I could acquaint you with Ms. Heidi Happy. Many thanks, Katherine, for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a precious and happy poem. I enjoyed the upbeat emotions and the wonderful rhyming sequences you used. Great job on this for the prompt!
Melissa
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is a precious and happy poem. I enjoyed the upbeat emotions and the wonderful rhyming sequences you used. Great job on this for the prompt!
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Melissa, for this wonderful review. I am delighted Heidi could make your day brighter. Rod
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful way to personify happiness! Great job - showing us what happiness looks like and how contagious "she" is. Happiness is such an important emotion. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Wonderful way to personify happiness! Great job - showing us what happiness looks like and how contagious "she" is. Happiness is such an important emotion. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hi, lyenochka. I am thrilled I could make your day brighter with my creation Heidi Happy. Rod
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is an excellent contest entry. Happiness is personified by a cheerful lass called Heidi. The rhyme scheme works well and the piece has a nice lilt to it.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This poem is an excellent contest entry. Happiness is personified by a cheerful lass called Heidi. The rhyme scheme works well and the piece has a nice lilt to it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Susan, for your very kind praise of my poem. I am delighted Heidi brightened your day. Rod
Comment from TommyWrites
I really liked this one! It's happy, easy, and enjoyable.
You make Ms. Heidi Happy...well sound happy!
I think you did a very good job on this poem, and I liked your neatly placed rhymes that flowed quite nicely.
Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I really liked this one! It's happy, easy, and enjoyable.
You make Ms. Heidi Happy...well sound happy!
I think you did a very good job on this poem, and I liked your neatly placed rhymes that flowed quite nicely.
Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Tommy, for your wonderful review. I am delighted Heidi brought cheer into your day. Rod
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Absolutely perfect. Your descriptions brought your character's 'bubbly soul' to life. I can't think of a more wonderful personification of an emotion. Have a wonderful evening!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Absolutely perfect. Your descriptions brought your character's 'bubbly soul' to life. I can't think of a more wonderful personification of an emotion. Have a wonderful evening!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Bobby, I am totally flattered by your praise of my poem and those six bright stars. Heidi Happy was fun to bring to life, and she apparently has brought much cheer into this site. Rod
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It was our pleasure, but you did all of the work.
