Heidi Happy
A personified emotion49 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about being happy and ignite a smile with everyone around you is 9 email of the best qualities we can have to make the world a better place for all.
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A very well-written poem about being happy and ignite a smile with everyone around you is 9 email of the best qualities we can have to make the world a better place for all.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from elchupakabra
I've read many of the other pieces for this contest and it's nice to see someone take on the lighter side. The poem flows well and is definitely a representation of happiness. Great work, thanks for sharing, later daze.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I've read many of the other pieces for this contest and it's nice to see someone take on the lighter side. The poem flows well and is definitely a representation of happiness. Great work, thanks for sharing, later daze.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I really felt this site needs more upbeat entries. I am delighted you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Those Heidi's do most definitely make this world a better place. Great poem which brings a character and an emotion to life. Could not be better. Bravo
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Those Heidi's do most definitely make this world a better place. Great poem which brings a character and an emotion to life. Could not be better. Bravo
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Heidi definitely is someone who brightens her surroundings. I am delighted she could brighten yours. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from LisaMay
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing a cheerful poem. Being able to share happiness and light up other lives is a rare gift. Your poem shows the impact of Heidi's warm and joyous personality, especially in the last stanza:
She has that rarest spark of life
that makes this world a better place.
Ms. Heidi Happy's joie de vivre
can put a smile on any face.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing a cheerful poem. Being able to share happiness and light up other lives is a rare gift. Your poem shows the impact of Heidi's warm and joyous personality, especially in the last stanza:
She has that rarest spark of life
that makes this world a better place.
Ms. Heidi Happy's joie de vivre
can put a smile on any face.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hi Lisa. I am so pleased you enjoyed meeting Heidi and that she brought some cheer into your world.
Comment from The Death
The personifications works really well here. It's such a delightful poem to read. Your descriptions are excellent and characterize happiness really well. Good use of alliteration. Fine use of rhyming makes this flow well. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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The personifications works really well here. It's such a delightful poem to read. Your descriptions are excellent and characterize happiness really well. Good use of alliteration. Fine use of rhyming makes this flow well. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for all the kind praise of my poem. Bringing Heidi to life this summer was a lot of fun, and I?ve been thrilled by the reception she?s received by FanStorians like you. Rod
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a well rhymed and metered write filled with laugher and joy and I loved reading about happy Heidi who seems like a person who would be welcomed into my circle of friends with open arms, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is a well rhymed and metered write filled with laugher and joy and I loved reading about happy Heidi who seems like a person who would be welcomed into my circle of friends with open arms, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hello, Dolly! I am in awe of the reception Heidi Happy has received from FanStorians. Thank you for your very kind praise. Rod
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Personification of an emotion captured in a smile and a happy girl that makes the hearts of all that lives around her see the life in pink colors. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Personification of an emotion captured in a smile and a happy girl that makes the hearts of all that lives around her see the life in pink colors. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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It was a real pleasure to bring Heidi Happy to life. I am delighted you enjoyed meeting her. Rod
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. She sounds like a very nice person who anyone would like to meet. Thanks for sharing this and have Yourself a really great day
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. She sounds like a very nice person who anyone would like to meet. Thanks for sharing this and have Yourself a really great day
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I do feel like Heidi would brighten anyone?s day. I am pleased she brought cheer into yours. Rod
Comment from Mia Twysted
I can feel a light-heartedness to this piece. It seemed to have two different rhythms going within it as I read it through. I cvouldn't seem to find a steady beat between them. But it ended wit a bouncy vote which help to bring it bac together.
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I can feel a light-heartedness to this piece. It seemed to have two different rhythms going within it as I read it through. I cvouldn't seem to find a steady beat between them. But it ended wit a bouncy vote which help to bring it bac together.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing my poem. Every line is written in iambic tetrameter, so you might want to read it again ALOUD to hear the rhythm, Mia. It is steady.
