Tournament of Dragons
A Nonet for the contest10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Tournament of Dragons, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and finds the magical connection between the darting dragonflies and the glories of fantasy and fun.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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This nonet, Tournament of Dragons, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and finds the magical connection between the darting dragonflies and the glories of fantasy and fun.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the comparison between the knights and the dragonflies. It gave me a image of them that I had never had before. Made them stronger and bolder. Let me feeling as if they have a pride in themselves.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I like the comparison between the knights and the dragonflies. It gave me a image of them that I had never had before. Made them stronger and bolder. Let me feeling as if they have a pride in themselves.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this bit of whimsy!
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem and your message is creative, but you left out your seventh line. The poem requires you to write 9 syllables - down to one syllable. I like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem and your message is creative, but you left out your seventh line. The poem requires you to write 9 syllables - down to one syllable. I like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I?m glad you caught that. I missed my third line somehow copying, pasting and revising. It?s been fixed. Thank you!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Title - a good hook to pull readers in
Shape - excellent
Story - coherent subject
Story line - tightly crafted
All in All - an interesting candidate for the contest
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Title - a good hook to pull readers in
Shape - excellent
Story - coherent subject
Story line - tightly crafted
All in All - an interesting candidate for the contest
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Nonet Poem Contest. Good nonet form.
I really like your poem about the dragonfly. It's the best one in the contest so far.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Nonet Poem Contest. Good nonet form.
I really like your poem about the dragonfly. It's the best one in the contest so far.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this bit of whimsy - tired of poems about politics, pandemics and protests...
Comment from The Death
Your poem has excellent imagery. I liked the unusual theme you have chosen. Excellent word economy. This flows really well, which is hard to achieve in this form. Lovely presentation as well. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Your poem has excellent imagery. I liked the unusual theme you have chosen. Excellent word economy. This flows really well, which is hard to achieve in this form. Lovely presentation as well. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this whimsical piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great little poem entry for the Nonet Poem writing prompt. I hope it does very well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is a great little poem entry for the Nonet Poem writing prompt. I hope it does very well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this whimsical piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and review!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Have to love the beautiful image you've skillfully painted for the reader! ;) An awesome offering for the nonet contest - Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Have to love the beautiful image you've skillfully painted for the reader! ;) An awesome offering for the nonet contest - Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Just a fun piece to end the week. Thanks for dropping by to read and review. Enjoy your weekend!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is quite a lovely poem with a picture to match. It is an excellent contest entry, since it meets the Nonet requirements as well. I enjoyed reading this one.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This is quite a lovely poem with a picture to match. It is an excellent contest entry, since it meets the Nonet requirements as well. I enjoyed reading this one.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Just a bit of whimsy on a hot summer night...thanks for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice poem, it flows well and I like the medieval style Scenes and imagery. I particularly enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This is a nice poem, it flows well and I like the medieval style Scenes and imagery. I particularly enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Just a bit of whimsy on a hot summer night...thanks for dropping by to read and review!
