Food For Thought
5-7-5 Poem about faith.14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual 5-7-5, Food for Thought, has the proper formatting and looks to the science of bread to understand the movings of the spirit.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This spiritual 5-7-5, Food for Thought, has the proper formatting and looks to the science of bread to understand the movings of the spirit.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Well put.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a powerful metaphor. Without thinking about the first part I thought this is a good metaphor for a recipe for bread. So you nailed it. Excellent.
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This is a powerful metaphor. Without thinking about the first part I thought this is a good metaphor for a recipe for bread. So you nailed it. Excellent.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like how you didn't use the word faith in your piece, yet it is so clearly stated that that is what you are doing, having faith. You give us the things that require faith and that help you to know that it is worth believing, "love an wisdom" With these things you will rise above that which you are hoping against.
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I like how you didn't use the word faith in your piece, yet it is so clearly stated that that is what you are doing, having faith. You give us the things that require faith and that help you to know that it is worth believing, "love an wisdom" With these things you will rise above that which you are hoping against.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a powerful entry for the Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt. I sincerely hope this poem does well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
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This is a powerful entry for the Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt. I sincerely hope this poem does well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your picture and your pun at the end. Our souls will rise just like bread rises and your picture reminds us that Jesus is the Bread of Life. Best wishes in the contest!
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Loved your picture and your pun at the end. Our souls will rise just like bread rises and your picture reminds us that Jesus is the Bread of Life. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from mauial
Took me a bit to connect your last line with the first. Recipe for bread I take would include yeast for the bread to rise. Love and wisdom is are necessary ingredients for faith.
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Took me a bit to connect your last line with the first. Recipe for bread I take would include yeast for the bread to rise. Love and wisdom is are necessary ingredients for faith.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written faith 5-7-5 when we place love andoing wisdom together and mix it with God's grace and Word you get a well baked bread with good food for thought.
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A very well-written faith 5-7-5 when we place love andoing wisdom together and mix it with God's grace and Word you get a well baked bread with good food for thought.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Absolutelly beautiful. I find it fasinating that there are so many believers on this site. Also so many christian related pieces of work. I feel like I"m in Church Sunday school, and enjoying it. This particular poem is really heart worming. Thank you.
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Absolutelly beautiful. I find it fasinating that there are so many believers on this site. Also so many christian related pieces of work. I feel like I"m in Church Sunday school, and enjoying it. This particular poem is really heart worming. Thank you.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful combination of truth and beautiful metaphoric testimony - love this one!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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What a wonderful combination of truth and beautiful metaphoric testimony - love this one!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from January L'Angelle
Wow! I really like this 575 poem. The way you made it into a recipe is brilliant. The double entendre at the end is awesome! Using the word "rise" could mean to rise to heaven or to rise as in bread rising or just rising to lift ones spirits. This was really well thought out and so great! I loved it. God bless. Hugs! -January L. :)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Wow! I really like this 575 poem. The way you made it into a recipe is brilliant. The double entendre at the end is awesome! Using the word "rise" could mean to rise to heaven or to rise as in bread rising or just rising to lift ones spirits. This was really well thought out and so great! I loved it. God bless. Hugs! -January L. :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Nice review. Thank you!
