Faith comes with Risk
Can you do it?13 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual 5-7-5, Faith Comes with Risk, has the proper formatting and accepts that forgiveness is no guarantee of happiness ever after.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This spiritual 5-7-5, Faith Comes with Risk, has the proper formatting and accepts that forgiveness is no guarantee of happiness ever after.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Very powerful, emotional poem, it's hard to believe it's just with 5-7-5 syllables, because it says so much. I think many of us have been in the position of the narrator of this poem; do I give the one who loves me, one more chance? This pulls at my heart-strings!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Very powerful, emotional poem, it's hard to believe it's just with 5-7-5 syllables, because it says so much. I think many of us have been in the position of the narrator of this poem; do I give the one who loves me, one more chance? This pulls at my heart-strings!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
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You're very welcome. - Mary Kay
Comment from Raul1
This poem shows a great example of why several people deserve a second chance in life. We need to make amends. simply said. Thanks for sharing your poem!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This poem shows a great example of why several people deserve a second chance in life. We need to make amends. simply said. Thanks for sharing your poem!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I'm glad you mentioned the concept of risk. I worked as an advotate for abuse victims. I recognize this as a possible example of the abuse cycle. I will speak from that perspective. What we're seeing here is the 3rd stage called the Honeymoon stage. In this stage, the abuser is apologizing, often with candy or flowers. They want things to work out and things do go well for a while until the tension starts again. The explosion put it all in jeopardy until the apology. This is a good topuc.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I'm glad you mentioned the concept of risk. I worked as an advotate for abuse victims. I recognize this as a possible example of the abuse cycle. I will speak from that perspective. What we're seeing here is the 3rd stage called the Honeymoon stage. In this stage, the abuser is apologizing, often with candy or flowers. They want things to work out and things do go well for a while until the tension starts again. The explosion put it all in jeopardy until the apology. This is a good topuc.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Gert sherwood
lancellot
your poem Faith comes with Risk
asking Can you do it?
Has a very emotional touch to it when you said in your last line-
Please, just one more chance.
I know got me feeling I would give in.
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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lancellot
your poem Faith comes with Risk
asking Can you do it?
Has a very emotional touch to it when you said in your last line-
Please, just one more chance.
I know got me feeling I would give in.
Gert
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome lancellot
Gert
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You are welcome lancellot
Gert
Comment from Mia Twysted
It's hard to put your faith in someone that has hurt you. I can feel the uneasiness of wondering if you should trust again. The pull of love you once felt going through your mind just wondering if they are going to do it again.
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It's hard to put your faith in someone that has hurt you. I can feel the uneasiness of wondering if you should trust again. The pull of love you once felt going through your mind just wondering if they are going to do it again.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a powerful entry for the Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt. I sincerely hope this poem does well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
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This is a powerful entry for the Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt. I sincerely hope this poem does well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from laMont Flanagan
The author describes the gamble of faith;where faith is perfect with GOD but imperfect with humans.The author comments that humans have the propensity to disappoint and their imperfections will shatter our faith.On the other hand,faith in GOD is absolute with no fallibility.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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The author describes the gamble of faith;where faith is perfect with GOD but imperfect with humans.The author comments that humans have the propensity to disappoint and their imperfections will shatter our faith.On the other hand,faith in GOD is absolute with no fallibility.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from gramalot8
Thank you for this well written poem for the 5/7/5 challenge. It can be good to give someone that second chance... but not maybe that third, fourth or fifth chance. Thanks for sharing this message with us.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you for this well written poem for the 5/7/5 challenge. It can be good to give someone that second chance... but not maybe that third, fourth or fifth chance. Thanks for sharing this message with us.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this one just hits really, really hard... doesn't it? Should you let the wound begin to heal for good or should you bandage it and hope it doesn't re-open....? Faith is certainly the only answer... great job! :)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Oh, this one just hits really, really hard... doesn't it? Should you let the wound begin to heal for good or should you bandage it and hope it doesn't re-open....? Faith is certainly the only answer... great job! :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
