Murder Mystery or Romance?
(1,233 words) A new member gathers some clues.4 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha quite a charmer Mr. Rhymes, oops wait there is actually somebody with this name here. I like your story it made me chuckle a few times. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Ha, ha, ha quite a charmer Mr. Rhymes, oops wait there is actually somebody with this name here. I like your story it made me chuckle a few times. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you - I appreciate your comments.
Comment from webfoot
oh wow, are you ever a good writer. I was hooked right in the beginning.
And to find out your found your prince through fanstory. What a plot.
So good. Maybe now that you put it out there, it might happen?
good luck, Glenda
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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oh wow, are you ever a good writer. I was hooked right in the beginning.
And to find out your found your prince through fanstory. What a plot.
So good. Maybe now that you put it out there, it might happen?
good luck, Glenda
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Fingers crossed the "law of attraction' might actually work!
Thanks for your positive review and praise.
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yes, when you put stuff out there in the universe, watch out. and good luck with the contest
Comment from Susan X Smith
This story sounds like it involves a bit of wishful thinking. Would be nice if all our suspicious encounters ended so happily. You did say that he was handsome, so that was an early hint. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This story sounds like it involves a bit of wishful thinking. Would be nice if all our suspicious encounters ended so happily. You did say that he was handsome, so that was an early hint. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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A "bit of wishful thinking" sure is an understatement. My secret dreams are so far-fetched they are laughably in the realm of ridiculously impossible. Still, the Law of Attraction has been known to work.
Comment from AJ McCall
I love how this ended... it was so sweet and kind. Don't we all have dreams? I love the picture by the way. I've never been to New Zealand but it sounds amazing and with that snow... I think I could live there. :)
Thanx for sharing this awesome piece!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I love how this ended... it was so sweet and kind. Don't we all have dreams? I love the picture by the way. I've never been to New Zealand but it sounds amazing and with that snow... I think I could live there. :)
Thanx for sharing this awesome piece!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. I've changed the story and picture now, to make it more anonymous.
Many people are wishing they lived in NZ now. Apparently our immigration inquiries are booming.
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Haha! You're welcome! I
