Time
For the one I love for all time.33 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Time is a wonderful subject to explore. Time clearly is elastic. Eckhart Tolle says time is something we invent in our minds. It is interesting how if two of us were sitting in the same room with a stop watch going, we would each perceive time differently, even though it was literally the same length of time. Your poem addresses this concept.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Time is a wonderful subject to explore. Time clearly is elastic. Eckhart Tolle says time is something we invent in our minds. It is interesting how if two of us were sitting in the same room with a stop watch going, we would each perceive time differently, even though it was literally the same length of time. Your poem addresses this concept.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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I have a few time poems coming. I'm so pleased you liked this and I'm always thankful for your kind reviews.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant take on permutations of perception of time--witty closer is star-worthy in itself. Touching dedication--wise use of the space--concise title is apt for the theme
Sally-- Congrats on your recognition. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Brilliant take on permutations of perception of time--witty closer is star-worthy in itself. Touching dedication--wise use of the space--concise title is apt for the theme
Sally-- Congrats on your recognition. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thanks for the kind of review that makes me feel so great! :))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sally, I love this poem my sweet friend...
stands still when I gaze into your eyes...
when my husband (passed) would look in my eyes...
we didn't have to speak to know what the other was
thinking...sigh...and we both loved the song...Time in a Bottle...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love the picture...so nicely written you...love you much...Linda xxoo
so good to see you...hope and pray all is well...xxoo
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hi Sally, I love this poem my sweet friend...
stands still when I gaze into your eyes...
when my husband (passed) would look in my eyes...
we didn't have to speak to know what the other was
thinking...sigh...and we both loved the song...Time in a Bottle...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love the picture...so nicely written you...love you much...Linda xxoo
so good to see you...hope and pray all is well...xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the beautiful review and glorious stars, Linda dear. You're like an angel bearing stardust! I really appreciate you and so very blessed by this.
Sending you my best today as always,
Love you!
Sal XOs....xo....
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Hi beautiful you, you are always so welcome...
And thank you so much for all your kind words....
Much love...xxoo
Comment from Irish Rain
Awww...so pretty!
And I love these two songs too,
especially Jim Croce.
Your entry is just perfect!
Best of luck to you,
blessings...
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Awww...so pretty!
And I love these two songs too,
especially Jim Croce.
Your entry is just perfect!
Best of luck to you,
blessings...
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear. I'm glad to know you enjoyed the songs, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
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Have a nice week!!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written four line poem. You've selected a beautiful
Photo choice to go with your words. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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This is a beautifully written four line poem. You've selected a beautiful
Photo choice to go with your words. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Joanne! It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)) XOs.....
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
You met the requirements for the four-line poem. I like the sentiment you have in this poem. I have to say, my two favorite lines, are the middle lines. The irony of the poem is the last line. After you show time moving, then you show it standing still.
Good luck in the contest.
Your pal,
Z
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello Sal.
You met the requirements for the four-line poem. I like the sentiment you have in this poem. I have to say, my two favorite lines, are the middle lines. The irony of the poem is the last line. After you show time moving, then you show it standing still.
Good luck in the contest.
Your pal,
Z
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and well-wishes, dear Z. I appreciate your support in my work. Sending you my best today as always,
Your pal, Sal :))
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You're welcome Sal.
Pal Z
Comment from country ranch writer
Time moves to fast in our pworld so much so time gets in our way way to often, we need to step back and reflect what is really important in our lives and get a new perspective on life.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Time moves to fast in our pworld so much so time gets in our way way to often, we need to step back and reflect what is really important in our lives and get a new perspective on life.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments, dear Barbara. I appreciate you so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from royowen
What a lovely job you've done with this four line poem dear Sally, it's the perfect love poem, but a great collection of definitions, all gathered brilliantly together, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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What a lovely job you've done with this four line poem dear Sally, it's the perfect love poem, but a great collection of definitions, all gathered brilliantly together, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Roy dear. I'm glad you liked this. I'm very appreciative of the wonderful review! Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs....
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Most welcome Sally.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Sally.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery about
time and how slow or fast it goes.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Hope you are doing well.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Sally.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery about
time and how slow or fast it goes.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Hope you are doing well.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Pam. I like your little wi term picture and the always kimd review you leave on my pages. Blessings always,
Sal XOs....
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You are very welcome, Sally, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How wonderful that time stands still at the appropriate moment Sally and we can let the good times resonate within our hearts, a fine poem, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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How wonderful that time stands still at the appropriate moment Sally and we can let the good times resonate within our hearts, a fine poem, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you so much for the beautiful review and generous stars! I'm so honored and blessed. Sending you my best today as always
Sal XOs...xo....
