In a Painted Sky
5-7-5 The changing colours of a sunrise14 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
What a marvelous illustration you have chosen to represent your poem. It is the things that revolve around us that you make some difference in our lives. Whether it be a sunrise or sunset, rain or snow or just a beautiful day, it should have influence on your state of mind. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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What a marvelous illustration you have chosen to represent your poem. It is the things that revolve around us that you make some difference in our lives. Whether it be a sunrise or sunset, rain or snow or just a beautiful day, it should have influence on your state of mind. Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I am very nature-based in my moods. I appreciate your review. Thank you!
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You are most welcome, Lisa May. It was my pleasure.
Comment from RodG
Sunrises can truly be glorious almost anywhere.
Easy to visualize the painter at his canvas sobbing "moody hues" from his palette. The alliteration also adds to the atmosphere desired.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Sunrises can truly be glorious almost anywhere.
Easy to visualize the painter at his canvas sobbing "moody hues" from his palette. The alliteration also adds to the atmosphere desired.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing, Rod. I love being outside at sunset or dawn.
Comment from royowen
A really great entry in this poetry contest. Some great alliteration that gives your poem internal strength. And a wonderful approach and character to move within this poem's limits, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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A really great entry in this poetry contest. Some great alliteration that gives your poem internal strength. And a wonderful approach and character to move within this poem's limits, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Good morning Roy. Thanks for your lovely review.
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My absolute pleasure
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Writing Prompt.
This lovely verse is well matched by the beautiful picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Writing Prompt.
This lovely verse is well matched by the beautiful picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Hello Sharon. Thanks for your nice review.
