Unicorn of the Sea
A Nonet on the Narwhal16 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Unicorn of the Sea
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Congratulations on the second place of the Animal Nonet Contest. It's very good, you deserve it. I like the Nonet form. I think Narwhals look funny and to think of them as unicorns is a funny notion.
Well done.
Narwhals
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Unicorn of the Sea
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Congratulations on the second place of the Animal Nonet Contest. It's very good, you deserve it. I like the Nonet form. I think Narwhals look funny and to think of them as unicorns is a funny notion.
Well done.
Narwhals
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you. The nonet is a fun format. Glad you liked this piece on the narwhal.
Comment from trimple
Good evening, June
This is a lovely Nonet poem about the facinating Narwhal whale. What ever the reason they specifically grow these tusks, they sure are magnificent!
Good luck in the contest, June
Much love
tracey
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Good evening, June
This is a lovely Nonet poem about the facinating Narwhal whale. What ever the reason they specifically grow these tusks, they sure are magnificent!
Good luck in the contest, June
Much love
tracey
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I am glad you enjoyed this fun piece on the narwhal!
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is an interesting animal. I have never seen one like it. There are so many different species out there that we will never know them all before we pass.
You poem gave me a partial image of who they are and how they live. However, as I read it aloud I stumbled with the words. I would have like to feel like I was of os his "ladies" swimming in the ocean with him.
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That is an interesting animal. I have never seen one like it. There are so many different species out there that we will never know them all before we pass.
You poem gave me a partial image of who they are and how they live. However, as I read it aloud I stumbled with the words. I would have like to feel like I was of os his "ladies" swimming in the ocean with him.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this animal nonet poetry contest, it speaks of a very special mammal, it's amazing how whales love to hang out in very cold regions of the earth's oceans. Well done, Great entry and graduation of narrative Good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent entry in this animal nonet poetry contest, it speaks of a very special mammal, it's amazing how whales love to hang out in very cold regions of the earth's oceans. Well done, Great entry and graduation of narrative Good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
They are such very intriguing creatures are they not? Good job mystery author! ;) A great nonet offering for the contest today - best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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They are such very intriguing creatures are they not? Good job mystery author! ;) A great nonet offering for the contest today - best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never soon one of these sea creatures before or heard of them, so you educated me here today and I enjoyed your fine nonet, you brought these unicorns to life, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I have never soon one of these sea creatures before or heard of them, so you educated me here today and I enjoyed your fine nonet, you brought these unicorns to life, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this fun piece on the narwhal. It is a very unusual type of whale. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. Always happy to hear from you.
Comment from Dawn Munro
First, your notes--what a fascinating read! Your nonet is well done indeed, and on such an uncommon topic. You even managed some rhyme! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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First, your notes--what a fascinating read! Your nonet is well done indeed, and on such an uncommon topic. You even managed some rhyme! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this fun piece on the narwhal. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your poem it represents so well this Artic creature. You made sound quite charming. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I love your poem it represents so well this Artic creature. You made sound quite charming. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this fun piece on the narwhal. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Animal Nonet contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Animal Nonet contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from mermaids
This mermaid loves your poem. This is the first poem written about a narwhale I have read. Your nonet form is smooth and you tell a whale tale here about a unique creature in the sea. Nothing less than a six.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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This mermaid loves your poem. This is the first poem written about a narwhale I have read. Your nonet form is smooth and you tell a whale tale here about a unique creature in the sea. Nothing less than a six.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece on the narwhal! Thank you for dropping by to read and review. And for the generous rating!
