Unicorn of the Sea
A Nonet on the Narwhal16 total reviews
Comment from roof35
This is a well written and very interesting animal nonet poem. Your illustration and your comments are both appreciated as they add to your words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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This is a well written and very interesting animal nonet poem. Your illustration and your comments are both appreciated as they add to your words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Interesting poem about a very unique animal, the norwhal. Thanks for sharing some information in your notes and expressing your creativity in your writing.
Bill
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Interesting poem about a very unique animal, the norwhal. Thanks for sharing some information in your notes and expressing your creativity in your writing.
Bill
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this fun piece on the narwhal.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I recently learned about
narwhals from a story about them.
-A well written nonet
with good syllable count,
and description, especially
about the romantic aspect.
-I like how he romances
his lady, and they dive down
to dine on the morsels from the sea.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I recently learned about
narwhals from a story about them.
-A well written nonet
with good syllable count,
and description, especially
about the romantic aspect.
-I like how he romances
his lady, and they dive down
to dine on the morsels from the sea.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this fun piece on the unicorn of the sea...
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about an animal and its nature. The first time that I hear of a unicorn from the ocean that seems to be a romantic who takes his love to dine on squid and shrimp.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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A very well-written Nonet about an animal and its nature. The first time that I hear of a unicorn from the ocean that seems to be a romantic who takes his love to dine on squid and shrimp.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you@ Glad you enjoyed meeting my unicorn of the sea!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
EXCELLENT poem for the Animal Nonet writing prompt entry
Contest! I loved the picture, colors and the words, they were all tied together for a unique presentation!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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EXCELLENT poem for the Animal Nonet writing prompt entry
Contest! I loved the picture, colors and the words, they were all tied together for a unique presentation!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much! I?m glad you like my salty little unicorn of the sea!
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;-)
Comment from To Write Is To Live
I like your opening line,
"Romantic unicorn of the sea,"
which sets the tone of your poem.
If my biology teacher would have taught his classes with nonet poetry, as you have written, I am sure I would have become a biologist! Thank you for introducing me to this new (at least to me) style of poetry, which I will have to try in the near future.
Thank you for writing and sharing, "Unicorn of the Sea."
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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I like your opening line,
"Romantic unicorn of the sea,"
which sets the tone of your poem.
If my biology teacher would have taught his classes with nonet poetry, as you have written, I am sure I would have become a biologist! Thank you for introducing me to this new (at least to me) style of poetry, which I will have to try in the near future.
Thank you for writing and sharing, "Unicorn of the Sea."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece. The nonet format is not as difficult as it looks. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts!
