Changing Seasons
Scenery Changes12 total reviews
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
Hi--"Changing Seasons" is a romp through the cycle of seasons with emphasis on the visual colors associated. The conclusion can't be argued with--comments can be heard each season that complain about that season. That's true.
The conclusion implies that people are seldom satisfied, no matter what season they're in.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Hi--"Changing Seasons" is a romp through the cycle of seasons with emphasis on the visual colors associated. The conclusion can't be argued with--comments can be heard each season that complain about that season. That's true.
The conclusion implies that people are seldom satisfied, no matter what season they're in.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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At least with the weather..lol. Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
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cheers
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Four Seasons writing prompt contest. Good form in accordance to the contest rules. You included them all. Good rhyme. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Four Seasons writing prompt contest. Good form in accordance to the contest rules. You included them all. Good rhyme. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Poet,
I liked your entry in the Four Seasons contest. You address each season... "Summer's lease"
Autumn's "cool crisp air"
Winter's white blanket
Spring's readiness
I've got a suggestion for you.
"as nature now (redos) the scene." ... ("redos" isn't in the dictionary. At least not in my Collins Canadian English Dictionary. Perhaps it's a spelling error? What do you think of this...
as nature now rescinds the scene)
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Hi Mystery Poet,
I liked your entry in the Four Seasons contest. You address each season... "Summer's lease"
Autumn's "cool crisp air"
Winter's white blanket
Spring's readiness
I've got a suggestion for you.
"as nature now (redos) the scene." ... ("redos" isn't in the dictionary. At least not in my Collins Canadian English Dictionary. Perhaps it's a spelling error? What do you think of this...
as nature now rescinds the scene)
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your suggestion. It was a spelling error( I forgot an E). It is a word thats means redecorate. I appreciate you pointing out my mistake. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from RShipp
The last line gave an earned chuckle. No matter the beauty, we will always find something to complain about.
You have met the requirements of the Four Seasons writing prompt contest: Write a five line poem that somehow incorporates the topic, Seasons.
Best of luck in the Four Seasons writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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The last line gave an earned chuckle. No matter the beauty, we will always find something to complain about.
You have met the requirements of the Four Seasons writing prompt contest: Write a five line poem that somehow incorporates the topic, Seasons.
Best of luck in the Four Seasons writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, and for this great review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Four Seasons Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Four Seasons Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you, I really appreciate it. :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You depict each season well with your well chosen words. The changing weather depicts life itself. When we're children to teens, it's Spring, then
the Summer of our life is the most active into Autumn where things start to settle and then comes Winter and you know what. Well done.
Raffaelina
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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You depict each season well with your well chosen words. The changing weather depicts life itself. When we're children to teens, it's Spring, then
the Summer of our life is the most active into Autumn where things start to settle and then comes Winter and you know what. Well done.
Raffaelina
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and for this great review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
very nice presentation.
-A well written poem, too.
-The imagery paints a vivid
picture of each season, and I
like the personification, as well.
-The first line is particularly
good with "summer's lease"
and "trees change dresses."
-This is a very good entry;
good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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-Great artwork and
very nice presentation.
-A well written poem, too.
-The imagery paints a vivid
picture of each season, and I
like the personification, as well.
-The first line is particularly
good with "summer's lease"
and "trees change dresses."
-This is a very good entry;
good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you. I'm a little concerned that I used compound sentences when all the others are a single line. I hope it qualifies. Thanks for the nice review.
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I saw your thread, and no one responded. I didn't read your lines as compound sentences. It said 5 lines, and that is what you did. My opinion is you did a great job! See what your other reviews are.
Comment from zanya
A great poetic response to the prompt Four Seasons - succinct and to the point- each season with a pertinent vignette and then 'nature now redos the scene'- well done - this one should make it to winner's enclosure - out of 6 stars unfortunately
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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A great poetic response to the prompt Four Seasons - succinct and to the point- each season with a pertinent vignette and then 'nature now redos the scene'- well done - this one should make it to winner's enclosure - out of 6 stars unfortunately
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this great review and the kind words. :)
Comment from RodG
I like how you focus on the changing colors of summer, fall, and winter in lines one, two, and three. But Spring is only vaguely described as nature redoing the scene.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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I like how you focus on the changing colors of summer, fall, and winter in lines one, two, and three. But Spring is only vaguely described as nature redoing the scene.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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I guess I just left that up to the imagination. :) Thanks for reading.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Another outstanding entry in this contest. I just love your creative imagery, your visuals, your flow. These stand out, among other lines:
Winter comes to blanket us, with covers white, fresh, cold, and clean
I lived on the East Coast for over 30 years, now I live in Nevada, and I miss show. Your poem brought of nostalgic memories. Thank you for your great artistic presentation and the picture.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Another outstanding entry in this contest. I just love your creative imagery, your visuals, your flow. These stand out, among other lines:
Winter comes to blanket us, with covers white, fresh, cold, and clean
I lived on the East Coast for over 30 years, now I live in Nevada, and I miss show. Your poem brought of nostalgic memories. Thank you for your great artistic presentation and the picture.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and very nice review. :)
