Little Prayers.
God Forgive Them...For...They Know Not What They Do.3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
As if one pandemic was not enough..
a gun violence pandemic is raging .. the numbers are shocking ..so many children , even a toddler ..
Young lives cut short ..
and in too many case those responsible will never be found
...people that know something are not willing to speak ..
Children should feel safe to play outside... and not get caught up in crossfires
Poverty is behind all this violence ..only a couple days after the BLM protests began, people started looting and shooting .
Trump keeps on saying he will make America great again.. well in the last 4 years he definitely didn't better the level of living of Black communities....
...this year is cursed and I fear before the year ends even a war could start near Turkey, Greece
This tug of war between America and China is going to finish badly too
Your poem depicts a sad reality ..
... we live in a society where not even the life of a child has value anymore?
I think God must be very sad ..
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As if one pandemic was not enough..
a gun violence pandemic is raging .. the numbers are shocking ..so many children , even a toddler ..
Young lives cut short ..
and in too many case those responsible will never be found
...people that know something are not willing to speak ..
Children should feel safe to play outside... and not get caught up in crossfires
Poverty is behind all this violence ..only a couple days after the BLM protests began, people started looting and shooting .
Trump keeps on saying he will make America great again.. well in the last 4 years he definitely didn't better the level of living of Black communities....
...this year is cursed and I fear before the year ends even a war could start near Turkey, Greece
This tug of war between America and China is going to finish badly too
Your poem depicts a sad reality ..
... we live in a society where not even the life of a child has value anymore?
I think God must be very sad ..
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
The life of a.... writing prompt contest. Your topic of the life of a child is very unique. Well done. You followed the rules of the contest well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
The life of a.... writing prompt contest. Your topic of the life of a child is very unique. Well done. You followed the rules of the contest well. Good luck.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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HELLO GYPSY BLUE ROSE: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from ESOSTINE
You poem captured it well. The height of man's inhumanity to fellow man will surely be diminished if there is commensurate punishment for every crime committed. Thanks for your thoughts and keep writing.
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You poem captured it well. The height of man's inhumanity to fellow man will surely be diminished if there is commensurate punishment for every crime committed. Thanks for your thoughts and keep writing.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
