Moving Terror
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Comment from mermaids
Your story is well written and clearly through the eyes of a child. The reader can see and feel as you did as a child. Often as a child, life is seen differently.
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Your story is well written and clearly through the eyes of a child. The reader can see and feel as you did as a child. Often as a child, life is seen differently.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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I can remember that vividly! Thanks for the good review!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Another adorable story written through the eyes of a child. Terrific creative imagery and visuals, nice pace and flow. This child was afraid of things and people that were 400 years ago! I am glad he got relieved in the end, and seemed to come to grips with his fear. Great choice of an artwork.
I wish you luck in the booths.
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Another adorable story written through the eyes of a child. Terrific creative imagery and visuals, nice pace and flow. This child was afraid of things and people that were 400 years ago! I am glad he got relieved in the end, and seemed to come to grips with his fear. Great choice of an artwork.
I wish you luck in the booths.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks for the great review. It was about me, and I am a girl. A girl afraid of being scalped!
