A Fruitful Encounter
Poem about faith in a stacked 5-7-5 suite.13 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Nice work on the form. I enjoyed the poem. The image is wonderful. I liked the phrase "lit by slanted light." Good job with this poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Nice work on the form. I enjoyed the poem. The image is wonderful. I liked the phrase "lit by slanted light." Good job with this poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you! I just kept going - maybe it's a bit long.
Comment from lyenochka
A wonderful testimonial story told in a suite of 575 stanzas! I like how you used the Garden metaphor which recalls Eden but it's a fallen garden which "lacks love" until the encounter with the Good Shepherd and His staff and "safe arbour." Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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A wonderful testimonial story told in a suite of 575 stanzas! I like how you used the Garden metaphor which recalls Eden but it's a fallen garden which "lacks love" until the encounter with the Good Shepherd and His staff and "safe arbour." Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your understanding review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
This work held me spellbound. Very interesting piece looking into our lives beyond earth. The 5-7-7 stalk was well kept and added colour to the rhythm. Thanks for sharing your inspiration and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This work held me spellbound. Very interesting piece looking into our lives beyond earth. The 5-7-7 stalk was well kept and added colour to the rhythm. Thanks for sharing your inspiration and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your appreciative review. I'm pleased it captured your interest.
