Dreams of Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Lady Valentine"A word collage about my life.
2 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a Rhyming poetry contest Entry. It has everything I look for in a poem: it rhymes, makes sense, and entertains me. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This should have been a Rhyming poetry contest Entry. It has everything I look for in a poem: it rhymes, makes sense, and entertains me. Very nice job.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Can't thank you enough for the stars. Really appreciate them, as well as your comments.
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
"for my heart it does pine," I'm sure most of us have had a time or circumstance in our lives when we desire a win for whatever reason. Nice rhyme throughout and it flowed pretty smooth. Never had a winning horse cross the line...only a Plow Line. Best regards.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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"for my heart it does pine," I'm sure most of us have had a time or circumstance in our lives when we desire a win for whatever reason. Nice rhyme throughout and it flowed pretty smooth. Never had a winning horse cross the line...only a Plow Line. Best regards.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Appreciate both your comments and rating. Thanks for reviewing. I have ownership in one that I hope crosses the finish line first on September 5th. Haven't yet written a poem about him.