I Cracked the Liberty Bell
July 4, 177613 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Very good entry for this prompt. Engagingly written, names, descriptions of the main protagonists clearly defined and followed by the fantasy-boy who told the whole nation by ringing the bell that the USA was an independent nation. Nice to read this piece!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Very good entry for this prompt. Engagingly written, names, descriptions of the main protagonists clearly defined and followed by the fantasy-boy who told the whole nation by ringing the bell that the USA was an independent nation. Nice to read this piece!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I a so pleased you enjoyed my story, Marjon. Many thanks for your kind praise.
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Comment from poetwatch
You picked a winner, author. :) Let's spit the difference, shall we? On the 6 of July, you done rang the Liberty with all your might and cracked the bell. Out of sight! :) Some people can think of what to write at the moment, some take their time and consider what to write. Some take their pen and write, but it doesn't come out write. You did a fantastic job. This is a good offering for My piece of history contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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You picked a winner, author. :) Let's spit the difference, shall we? On the 6 of July, you done rang the Liberty with all your might and cracked the bell. Out of sight! :) Some people can think of what to write at the moment, some take their time and consider what to write. Some take their pen and write, but it doesn't come out write. You did a fantastic job. This is a good offering for My piece of history contest.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, poetwatch, for your bodacious praise of my story.
Comment from Bill Schott
This flash fiction story, I Cracked the Liberty Bell, puts a heartbeat into the story of that historic day when this document, most famous in the world, was signed. Nice.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This flash fiction story, I Cracked the Liberty Bell, puts a heartbeat into the story of that historic day when this document, most famous in the world, was signed. Nice.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing my story. I am glad you enjoyed it.
