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A Treatise on How I Write by EBB

How might EBB have written her sonnets?

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Interesting entry for the How do you write your poetry? contest. Your love sonnet form in HOW DO I LOVE THEE? Style. It's beautiful with a wonderful rhythm. I like it. It's very classic. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much, Gypsy, for sharing my sonnet. I tried to emulate EBB and I am so pleased you enjoyed the result. Rod
Comment from Sally Law
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Ah, Sonnets of the Portuguese was my very first poetry reading. I wished for the book my grandparents once had in their home. It was well read and loved. A fine How-to in the voice of the famous poetess.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    It's so nice to hear from someone who enjoyed SONNETS OF THE PORTUGUESE. I am very pleased you enjoyed my poem, Sally.
    Rod
Comment from Bill Schott
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This Spenserian sonnet, A Treatise On How I Write by EBB, presents a probable explanation which we may accept as as good as one any from Ms. Browning.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    I am delighted you enjoyed my attempt to emulate Elizabeth Barrett Browning. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a lovely Sonnet in a style of Elizabeth Barrett Browning's original love poem "HOW DO I LOVE THEE". I love "love poems", especially in style of Sonnet.
Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    I have always loved that sonnet and I enjoyed trying to put myself in EBB's shoes as I wrote this one. Rod
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written sonnet about your love for writing sonnets I nthe the style of Elizabeth Barrett Browning and it seems you have execute it wonderfully.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    I am delighted you enjoyed my sonnet, Sandra. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I enjoyed your poem and
the way you chose to show
how you write poetry in the style of EBB.
-It's interesting to see who
has inspired us to write.
-I like the lines about when she
hears him laugh or sees his smile.
-I also like your theme and
the concluding lines.
-A very good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    I am so pleased you enjoyed my sonnet, Pam. It was challenging to put myself in EBB's shoes, but I had fun doing so. Rod
reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Aug-2020
    You are very welcome, Rod. It was a very creative idea. This was a really good contest with many good entries. Congratulations on your second place finish.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Thanks! And congrats for winning! Rod
reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Aug-2020
    You are welcome, and thank you, as well, Rod. You channeled your inner EBB very well:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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I often wonder how poets come up with their poetry. This contest is an eye opener. I see that the brain power of a poet is quite amazing. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Hi, Rebecca. Well, I don't know if my brain power is amazing. I must admit it was a challenge to step into EBB's shoes, but I had fun trying to. Rod
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 19-Aug-2020
    You did quite well!
Comment from lyenochka
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Sonnets are perfect for conveying love and you did it so well here. Love is a natural inspiration for poetry. And the poems are written to delight the beloved. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    I am always amazed when I read EBB's sonnet to her husband as it expresses her love so emphatically. Many thanks for sharing mine, lyenochka.
    Rod
Comment from ameen786
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My friend, you penned a beautiful poem in lovely verses and excellent rhymes; unique/original verses, "I'll fashion lines that end in pleasing rhyme, their cadence mimicking my heart's profile."Simply awesome; thanks for the treat.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    I am so pleased you enjoyed my sonnet, ameen. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Raul1
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I see where you get your inspiration for poetry. If that is how you write them keep writing. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Beautifully written. Good luck on the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much, Raul, for your encouraging review of my sonnet. It was a challenge to step into EBB's shoes, but I had fun. Rod
reply by Raul1 on 19-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.
reply by Raul1 on 19-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.