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Ghosts

The scent of burning leaves brings thoughts of long ago

2 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a cleverly written piece, conjuring up several layers of meaning - the Indian summer referring to an extended spell of warm, dry weather; the imagery of long-gone Indian braves dancing around a fire; the smell of the burning leaves summoning the ghosts of memories; and maybe Indian smoke signals from the fire. The illustration is perfect. If voters are sensible, this should win, or at least feature very highly.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    Thank you again for your read and review, the six stars rating is much appreciated.
Comment from zanya
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

It's a haunting,evocative image painted in words here of the change of seasons from Summer to Autumn and the dormant time of year when and an interesting visual

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your read and review.