Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Resentment can lead to anger and hurt feelings. By removing the resentment one reaches contentment, well said. Such true and powerful words, you meet the criteria. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Wise words here that I could identify with, resentment can indeed ruffle and change our mood and cause us much angst, it is better to forgive and move on, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thanks for your comments. Simmering resentment is a very damaging emotion.

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

First of all Author you are so very creative! And your choice of bright yellow with the smiley face proves to be the best convincing tool to promote love and forgiveness. It leaves the reader with a bubbly feeling and your cleverly rhyming words add to the power of the message. Fantastic job!

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 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thank you!

Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor

Excellent

Excellent great three matching words. I write a lot of limericks and they all need 3 matching words. this is one of my favorites.
A friend is kind of a hobby.
And I had a friend named Bobby.
Lone Ranger had one.
He was like a son.
And he called him KIMOSOBBY?

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 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thanks for reviewing. I write limericks sometimes too, so i know what you mean about choosing 3 rhyming words. I like your limerick.