Slothful
Deadly Sin2 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed the irony in your post!
Nice use of alliteration and rhyme in your 5-7-5 and well presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello :)
I enjoyed the irony in your post!
Nice use of alliteration and rhyme in your 5-7-5 and well presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Karen Estep
I thought this was very good. Perhaps a change in the manner of presentation. I had to read it more than once to separate the words am I folks. Maybe..
Such a sneaky sin
Am I
Folks hardly notice
As I pass them by.
The content is awesome and I love the graphic you chose
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I thought this was very good. Perhaps a change in the manner of presentation. I had to read it more than once to separate the words am I folks. Maybe..
Such a sneaky sin
Am I
Folks hardly notice
As I pass them by.
The content is awesome and I love the graphic you chose
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
