Cascading Memories of Love
Entry for the Repetition contest17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written repetition poem in the format of the Kyrielle about our memories that will always be with us wherever we go in our lives we can recall them.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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A very well-written repetition poem in the format of the Kyrielle about our memories that will always be with us wherever we go in our lives we can recall them.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what a beautifully melodic offering that sings of love and the strength it carries through the years... yet your words are so very soothing and gentle... great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Oh, what a beautifully melodic offering that sings of love and the strength it carries through the years... yet your words are so very soothing and gentle... great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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I appreciate the kind review and positive insights. Thank you!
Comment from Susan X Smith
You have used some great repetition in these lines and so the poem is an excellent contest entry. It is light hearted and somewhat romantic with a picture to match.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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You have used some great repetition in these lines and so the poem is an excellent contest entry. It is light hearted and somewhat romantic with a picture to match.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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I appreciate the kind review and positive insights. Thank you!
Comment from Carlos' girl
Just perfect. A wonderful poem with a good theme, strong imagery and perfect repitition. You have crafted a fine poem with lots of beautiful words and rhymes
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Just perfect. A wonderful poem with a good theme, strong imagery and perfect repitition. You have crafted a fine poem with lots of beautiful words and rhymes
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A finely rhymed Kyrielle with perfect meter and the love, dreams and memories flowed like silk here, a pearl of a cascading write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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A finely rhymed Kyrielle with perfect meter and the love, dreams and memories flowed like silk here, a pearl of a cascading write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed these cascading memories! Appreciate your stopping by.
Comment from Royette Dickenson
This is one of the poems that many should be able to understand. Using thought provoking expressions, the poet's journey is seen and the emotions are felt. The use of figurative language is clearly seen through the poet's play on words.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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This is one of the poems that many should be able to understand. Using thought provoking expressions, the poet's journey is seen and the emotions are felt. The use of figurative language is clearly seen through the poet's play on words.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bobby Dean
Could be very relatable, i would assume, for I have experienced that whirlwind... that "swirl of pearls-"kind-of-feeling. Cascading memories... memories coming all at once, evoking much emotion. should be written about; good job.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Could be very relatable, i would assume, for I have experienced that whirlwind... that "swirl of pearls-"kind-of-feeling. Cascading memories... memories coming all at once, evoking much emotion. should be written about; good job.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
