Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Beet"My book of poems and stories
17 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Annie. I enjoyed reading your "beet" topic poem for the club. The image will load automatically when you post your poem even though you may not see it when you go into the Picture This club page to post it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Hi Annie. I enjoyed reading your "beet" topic poem for the club. The image will load automatically when you post your poem even though you may not see it when you go into the Picture This club page to post it. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your wonderfully kind review. ( :
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, vividly descriptive, pull-no-punches poem tells exactly how you feel about beets. I feel that way about liver! There's really no logical way of accounting for what we do and do not like.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Your well-written, vividly descriptive, pull-no-punches poem tells exactly how you feel about beets. I feel that way about liver! There's really no logical way of accounting for what we do and do not like.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Wow and I love liver. Who would know. Thank you so much for reviewing and your thoughtful comments.
Comment from mermaids
You have a strong steady beat and a smooth flow of rhyming words. I like how you do not like beets and it comes across clearly, how much you dislike them. You have a vivid use of words.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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You have a strong steady beat and a smooth flow of rhyming words. I like how you do not like beets and it comes across clearly, how much you dislike them. You have a vivid use of words.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I really do like beets. Had to think of the pea when writing this as they are the vegetable that I can't eat. This was a challenge for sure. Thank you so much for reviewing this post.
Comment from Mastery
Awww. You don't like beets? I love them, Harvard, Pickled, sliced, diced, anyway you serve em up. I even like them cold rather than warmed up. So there. LOL Very interesting poem, Annie. Time to harvest them. LOL Bob
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Awww. You don't like beets? I love them, Harvard, Pickled, sliced, diced, anyway you serve em up. I even like them cold rather than warmed up. So there. LOL Very interesting poem, Annie. Time to harvest them. LOL Bob
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I really do like beets but can only eat them pickled. Had to think of the pea when writing this as they are the vegetable that I can't eat. This was a challenge for sure. Thank you so much for reviewing this post.
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You are welcome, Annie. : ) Bob
Comment from royowen
I've always been fascinated by what people like regarding food, I love beetroot, (I believe it's great heart food.) but my wife won't touch, so consequently we rarely eat it. This is a great interpretation of this week's picture this post, Annie, well dine, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I've always been fascinated by what people like regarding food, I love beetroot, (I believe it's great heart food.) but my wife won't touch, so consequently we rarely eat it. This is a great interpretation of this week's picture this post, Annie, well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I really do like beets but can only eat them pickled. Had to think of the pea when writing this as they are the vegetable that I can't eat. This was a challenge for sure. Thank you so much for reviewing this post.
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Well done
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Such a pity that you don't like beets. They are one of the most nutritious vegetables. They have a ton of potassium in them which really helps your heart. The poem is well done and with the picture is a very nice presentation.
Ralf
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Such a pity that you don't like beets. They are one of the most nutritious vegetables. They have a ton of potassium in them which really helps your heart. The poem is well done and with the picture is a very nice presentation.
Ralf
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I really do like beets but can only eat them pickled. Had to think of the pea when writing this as they are the vegetable that I can't eat. This was a challenge for sure. Thank you so much for reviewing this post.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! Annie, you are woman after my own heart, I so dislike beets, the texture, the appearance, the taste, I am with you all the way here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Wow! Annie, you are woman after my own heart, I so dislike beets, the texture, the appearance, the taste, I am with you all the way here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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What is funny is I can't even tolerate the color red. Thank you for reviewing. I was surprised at the amount of reviewers that stated they do like them. Stay well and safe these days.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about bets that you don't like to eat. We do not all live to eat the same things that is what makes us all unique. I love beet and it places iron in my blood.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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A very well-written poem about bets that you don't like to eat. We do not all live to eat the same things that is what makes us all unique. I love beet and it places iron in my blood.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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What is funny is I can't even tolerate the color red. Thank you for reviewing. I was surprised at the amount of reviewers that stated they do like them. Stay well and safe these days.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like how the tone changes from one stanza to the other. At first the speaker sounds like they are praising the beet. The reader who likes beets would be drawn in to enjoy the little account. Then suddenly the truth comes out. This will draw in another reader who had been sitting back. Finally another, who dislikes beets. Clever.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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I like how the tone changes from one stanza to the other. At first the speaker sounds like they are praising the beet. The reader who likes beets would be drawn in to enjoy the little account. Then suddenly the truth comes out. This will draw in another reader who had been sitting back. Finally another, who dislikes beets. Clever.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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What is funny is I can't even tolerate the color red. Thank you for reviewing. I was surprised at the amount of reviewers that stated they do like them. Stay well and safe these days.
Comment from Justin Chopin
I have those same sentiments about broccoli Annie. Great job describing the reprehensible feelings you have towards beets and your general repulsion towards them being so strong that if you ever saw one you would have to stop yourself from barfing over your kitchen table. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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I have those same sentiments about broccoli Annie. Great job describing the reprehensible feelings you have towards beets and your general repulsion towards them being so strong that if you ever saw one you would have to stop yourself from barfing over your kitchen table. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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What is funny is I can't even tolerate the color red. Thank you for reviewing. I was surprised at the amount of reviewers that stated they do like them. Stay well and safe these days.
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You're welcome.