The Positive Dreamer
(2-10-2) Thinking beyond: wishing, hoping, dreaming.16 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
Dreams and hope, how can we live without either? I still think that people that have both of these qualities survive so much better than those people that who do not. Good message and best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Dreams and hope, how can we live without either? I still think that people that have both of these qualities survive so much better than those people that who do not. Good message and best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you! I agree with the sentiments expressed in your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 2-10-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good job with the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 2-10-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good job with the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dick Waters
Well done!
You put together a well balanced piece. The picture catches your attention, and I get the motive behind it.
Good luck in the contest!
Lots of entries for this contest.
Dick
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Well done!
You put together a well balanced piece. The picture catches your attention, and I get the motive behind it.
Good luck in the contest!
Lots of entries for this contest.
Dick
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review, Dick.
Comment from RShipp
Even behind the window ... there is future!
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Please write three lines with a syllable count of 2, then 10, then 2.
Best of luck in the 2-10-2 Poem contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Even behind the window ... there is future!
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Please write three lines with a syllable count of 2, then 10, then 2.
Best of luck in the 2-10-2 Poem contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
Yes, when awake to rawness of reality. Sometimes it is good that the mind has a built-in escape hatch to the world of dreams. I think that is one of God's greatest gifts to man. He knew things would be hard when we are awake and gave us a respite in our sleep.
Great entry.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Yes, when awake to rawness of reality. Sometimes it is good that the mind has a built-in escape hatch to the world of dreams. I think that is one of God's greatest gifts to man. He knew things would be hard when we are awake and gave us a respite in our sleep.
Great entry.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. I think our minds protect us from a lot of bad stuff by being able to take us to a different zone.
Comment from Mia Twysted
The phrase, "raw to this reality" really seemed to strike a cord with me. We all have to take in the world at it is and still be able to look past it and attempt to achieve that which we desire most.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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The phrase, "raw to this reality" really seemed to strike a cord with me. We all have to take in the world at it is and still be able to look past it and attempt to achieve that which we desire most.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I was going to write "harsh reality" but that is a cliche and I wanted a fresh phrase. Thanks for your review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry for the 2-10-2 poetry writing prompt. This powerful truth is right on the mark. I sure hope it does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This is a great entry for the 2-10-2 poetry writing prompt. This powerful truth is right on the mark. I sure hope it does well in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-10-2, The Positive Dreamer, has the right set up and reminds the reader that this situation too will pass. The isolation will be over and life will go on.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This 2-10-2, The Positive Dreamer, has the right set up and reminds the reader that this situation too will pass. The isolation will be over and life will go on.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thanks Bill.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, if only that was the 'mood' that was being encouraged... A wonderful offering for this limited-format contest this evening - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
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Oh, if only that was the 'mood' that was being encouraged... A wonderful offering for this limited-format contest this evening - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
Comment from ESOSTINE
Well said! Despite the realities before us, it is rewarding to remain focused on our dreams and pursue them with commitment. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and good luck in the contest.
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Well said! Despite the realities before us, it is rewarding to remain focused on our dreams and pursue them with commitment. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
