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Twilight Reverie

a 5-7-5 contest entry

8 total reviews 
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand short poem entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    I truly appreciate your kind praise of my twilight haiku, Rebecca. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 26-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from zanya
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Yes twilight is such a beautiful time of day and here it is portrayed as being imprinted with the Divine 'we see God's smile ' a beautiful picture to illustrate

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much, zanya, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from LisaMay
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This is a lovely poem that sets the tone for enjoying that contemplative time of day which draws us close to God, and we can feel that all is well in quietude.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Oh, you articulate beautifully what I am trying to say in my poem, Lisa. Thank you very much for this terrific review.
reply by LisaMay on 22-Aug-2020
    We must be on the same page with emotional connection.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Your reverie about time for twilight is somewhat important but at the same time it is very interesting to learn; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Thank you, ALCREATOR, for sharing my short poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
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Another short but sweet. That really struck me. Yes I do believe that god smiles at those times. But, I do not think God is smiling right now, I'm sure he is frowning, and wondering when we will learn that love is the way.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    I think God often shakes His head and frowns at us. Many thanks, Becky, for sharing my poem.
Comment from Oscar J. Perez
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Alright; I need to find the voting for this contest and vote for yours. I love how you describe the twilight as God's smile : ) the picture goes great with your 5-7-5 Twilight contest entry too.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Thank you, Oscar, for your kind praise of my poem and endorsement.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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I liked the metaphor of God's smile. Great descriptive imagery and visuals, loved your picture. This should do very well in the contest, I wish you luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much, Eternal Muse, for your encouraging review of my haiku.
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes indeed, I think God takes much pleasure in many things, though we're a sneaky lot, we can take God by surprise. Well done. good luck, Blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much, Roy, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
reply by royowen on 22-Aug-2020
    Welcome