Winds of Change
A Minute poem for the contest71 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
When I saw the name Persephone, I was a goner. That is my grand mother's middle name, as well as the name of at least one of my cousins. I love how you romanticize the passing of seasons. You actually make the onset of Winter not sound or feel so bad. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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When I saw the name Persephone, I was a goner. That is my grand mother's middle name, as well as the name of at least one of my cousins. I love how you romanticize the passing of seasons. You actually make the onset of Winter not sound or feel so bad. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Nomi. A lovely name, full of the promise of spring. I appreciate your encouraging comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Tina Crute
I love this but have no more sixes! How beautiful the language, especially the first stanza. It could stand alone. This is very lovely. Good luck in the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I love this but have no more sixes! How beautiful the language, especially the first stanza. It could stand alone. This is very lovely. Good luck in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Tina. I appreciate your lovely comments. Best wishes, Tony.
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No problem. You're welcome!
Comment from ameen786
Dynamite! Simply awesome poetry, my friend you transformed simple wordings into amazing, meaningful phrases and excellent rhymes; I'd be surprised if this is not a winner.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Dynamite! Simply awesome poetry, my friend you transformed simple wordings into amazing, meaningful phrases and excellent rhymes; I'd be surprised if this is not a winner.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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What a nice thing to say. Thank you very much for your supportive comments and the sixth star. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from June Sargent
Well, here in New England, we are preparing for autumn. The leaves will soon begin to change into fall shades of crimson, orange and gold. The they will turn brown. But, spring will follow winter and we will see rebirth when the trees begin to bud. Lovely minute poem that highlights hope.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Well, here in New England, we are preparing for autumn. The leaves will soon begin to change into fall shades of crimson, orange and gold. The they will turn brown. But, spring will follow winter and we will see rebirth when the trees begin to bud. Lovely minute poem that highlights hope.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your comments, June. The eternal cycle of seasons is a great joy, isn?t it? All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Janet Foor
"Winds of Change" is a beautiful minute poem Tony. Very nice rhyme and excellent imagery. Most people don't like change even in the weather. But...change is the one constant that we have.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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"Winds of Change" is a beautiful minute poem Tony. Very nice rhyme and excellent imagery. Most people don't like change even in the weather. But...change is the one constant that we have.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your wise comments, Janet. Change is inevitable, fortunately! All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from mermaids
There is a light feel and flow to your words. "Away with death" in the first verse draws the reader into your words. The mention of brown leaves swaying also adds to the visual impact of your words.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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There is a light feel and flow to your words. "Away with death" in the first verse draws the reader into your words. The mention of brown leaves swaying also adds to the visual impact of your words.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your supportive comments, Mermaids. Appreciated, as always. Tony.
Comment from Ben Colder
Poet, you placed me into where my character in my book is now. Freezing winds.
You did well with this short poem and I find nothing wrong.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Poet, you placed me into where my character in my book is now. Freezing winds.
You did well with this short poem and I find nothing wrong.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Ben. I?ll try to look in on your story occasionally. I hear good things about it. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from eliz100
This poem was a pleasant read secondary to the flow of your words. The picture matches the poem. Your words painted a picture of the end of winter and the hope for spring.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This poem was a pleasant read secondary to the flow of your words. The picture matches the poem. Your words painted a picture of the end of winter and the hope for spring.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Eliz100. I appreciate both your time and your supportive comments. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Earl Corp
It's impressive that you wrote this poem in a minute. It rhymes, makes sense and makes you think. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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It's impressive that you wrote this poem in a minute. It rhymes, makes sense and makes you think. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review, Earl. Would that I could dash one of these off in a minute! It?s an interesting poetic form and more demanding than at first appears. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from amada
This is a very well written piece. Its lines about the teasing wind are enchanting and very visual. The wind has movement. I enjoyed reading this piece.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This is a very well written piece. Its lines about the teasing wind are enchanting and very visual. The wind has movement. I enjoyed reading this piece.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Amanda. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony.
