Next Stop Normandy
One man in the right place can matter30 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Great story! I love this premise. I've been thinking about sacrifice and battle, win and lose. This helps to grasp at something real. I'm glad you went for it. I'll keep these things swirling in the old brain for awhile yet. Good job.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Great story! I love this premise. I've been thinking about sacrifice and battle, win and lose. This helps to grasp at something real. I'm glad you went for it. I'll keep these things swirling in the old brain for awhile yet. Good job.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how much historical detail that you wrote into this piece. You seem to know the "leaps" well even including the "Whoosh." You got me convinced that these were real people. Best wishes in the contest!
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I like how much historical detail that you wrote into this piece. You seem to know the "leaps" well even including the "Whoosh." You got me convinced that these were real people. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an excellent entry for the Quantum Leap Into Time writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish the best of luck to you!
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This is an excellent entry for the Quantum Leap Into Time writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish the best of luck to you!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Anonymous,
Interesting entry for the Quantum Leap Into Time writing prompt contest. So I am guessing you took a quantum leap into Private George Franklin... wow, I would not want to be in your shoes.... lol You kept the story believable, for a flash fiction. Good job. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Hello, Anonymous,
Interesting entry for the Quantum Leap Into Time writing prompt contest. So I am guessing you took a quantum leap into Private George Franklin... wow, I would not want to be in your shoes.... lol You kept the story believable, for a flash fiction. Good job. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from Justin Chopin
Well done. I thought you did very well recreating Quantum Leap especially with how well you explained everything that happened when the US stormed the beaches of Normandy. Thought the dialogue was very concise
and found your story to be very realistic. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Well done. I thought you did very well recreating Quantum Leap especially with how well you explained everything that happened when the US stormed the beaches of Normandy. Thought the dialogue was very concise
and found your story to be very realistic. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
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You're welcome Earl.
Comment from nomi338
I have always believed that little things that we do or say, can change the very course of history. For example, you might encourage someone to be ore courageous and that person may go on to do something heroic. Or you may convince someone to look out for number one only and that person my fail to do the right thing at the right time and cause someone to be injured or even killed.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I have always believed that little things that we do or say, can change the very course of history. For example, you might encourage someone to be ore courageous and that person may go on to do something heroic. Or you may convince someone to look out for number one only and that person my fail to do the right thing at the right time and cause someone to be injured or even killed.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
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You are certainly welcome.
Comment from TommyWrites
This is great!
I was disappointed when it ended. It was so action filled, and kept me on the edge of my seat. Literally. I was leaning closer and closer to my computer. You did a great job telling this story, and I really like your style of writing.
Good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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This is great!
I was disappointed when it ended. It was so action filled, and kept me on the edge of my seat. Literally. I was leaning closer and closer to my computer. You did a great job telling this story, and I really like your style of writing.
Good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a very well written story. You used a great descriptive imagery and visuals; I like your creativity. I wish a Quantum Leap could become reality, so we can just be transported in another era and time. Excellent artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in that unusual contest.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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This was a very well written story. You used a great descriptive imagery and visuals; I like your creativity. I wish a Quantum Leap could become reality, so we can just be transported in another era and time. Excellent artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in that unusual contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from roof35
Well, you certainly took that quantum leap. I am not familiar with the show, but you did a fine job of describing the action and how you changed the outcome. Nicely done.
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Well, you certainly took that quantum leap. I am not familiar with the show, but you did a fine job of describing the action and how you changed the outcome. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
That was very exciting. Very descriptive also, almost too much. It was a little scary. My step dad was in WW2, in Sicily, under General Patton. He didn't talk about it much, too painful, and he lost a lot of buddies. Hope and Pray we quit all that sort of thing.
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That was very exciting. Very descriptive also, almost too much. It was a little scary. My step dad was in WW2, in Sicily, under General Patton. He didn't talk about it much, too painful, and he lost a lot of buddies. Hope and Pray we quit all that sort of thing.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
