Jealousy
An Acrostic- Loop Poem33 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you got the perfect definition of this human sin: jealousy. Thank you for sharing abd and good luck with the contest and with your writings..
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I think you got the perfect definition of this human sin: jealousy. Thank you for sharing abd and good luck with the contest and with your writings..
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Eckhart Tolle would say jealousy results in the ego. And the ego is the mind chattering nonsense and untruths. Our paying attention to the illusions the ego weaves is what makes us miserable and unhappy. If we could realize jealousy is based on illusion there would be no need for i to even be in our experience or vocabulary. Your poem is well expressed.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Eckhart Tolle would say jealousy results in the ego. And the ego is the mind chattering nonsense and untruths. Our paying attention to the illusions the ego weaves is what makes us miserable and unhappy. If we could realize jealousy is based on illusion there would be no need for i to even be in our experience or vocabulary. Your poem is well expressed.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, yes ego and jealousy?
Comment from lyenochka
Amazing how you create these looping acrostic poems! I really liked that powerful beginning that "jealousy is... not painted but etched." It goes so far deeper and becomes an obsession. Best wishes in the contest!
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Amazing how you create these looping acrostic poems! I really liked that powerful beginning that "jealousy is... not painted but etched." It goes so far deeper and becomes an obsession. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gloria ....
Author you definitely like to give yourself an additional challenge with not only an acrostic poem, but a loop poem too. First I must say I truly enjoyed the shade of green you picked for your presentation.
I think you've clearly showed how jealousy and envy seek to destroy that which it cannot have itself and that it is a dark and unyielding pit of destruction.
Excellent write and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Author you definitely like to give yourself an additional challenge with not only an acrostic poem, but a loop poem too. First I must say I truly enjoyed the shade of green you picked for your presentation.
I think you've clearly showed how jealousy and envy seek to destroy that which it cannot have itself and that it is a dark and unyielding pit of destruction.
Excellent write and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Eternal Muse
An interesting rendition of the word jealousy. You described it so well in your own words. Great creative imagery and visuals, also I love your presentation in the color green and artwork.
This should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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An interesting rendition of the word jealousy. You described it so well in your own words. Great creative imagery and visuals, also I love your presentation in the color green and artwork.
This should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from equestrik
This is a very clever write on jealousy and it really drives the point home with the repetition from last word in a line being the first word in the next forming the acrostic. Nicely done.
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This is a very clever write on jealousy and it really drives the point home with the repetition from last word in a line being the first word in the next forming the acrostic. Nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are deep, strong, interesting and creative. I found
this poem to be stated with descriptive words and emotions. I pondered
on the theme of these words. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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The author's words are deep, strong, interesting and creative. I found
this poem to be stated with descriptive words and emotions. I pondered
on the theme of these words. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic loop poem, Jealousy, follows the vertical letter theme and applies the repetition of end words to add value to this powerful verse about green-eyed monster.
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This acrostic loop poem, Jealousy, follows the vertical letter theme and applies the repetition of end words to add value to this powerful verse about green-eyed monster.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the One Word: Jealousy writing prompt contest. The presentation is beautiful...I love the color scheme. I like how you dissected the topic from a distant point of view. The acrostic form is done well. This is one of the best one in the voting booth so far.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the One Word: Jealousy writing prompt contest. The presentation is beautiful...I love the color scheme. I like how you dissected the topic from a distant point of view. The acrostic form is done well. This is one of the best one in the voting booth so far.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What truth is in this little poem. If what you wrote is taken to heart, people might find more satisfaction in their life. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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What truth is in this little poem. If what you wrote is taken to heart, people might find more satisfaction in their life. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.
