What Jealousy?
Letting it go14 total reviews
Comment from WriterHeather
I love the direction you took with this prompt. I was expecting all of the entries to he about being jealous. A message of gratitude makes me happy to read. Your writing is beautiful as well is your presentation. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I love the direction you took with this prompt. I was expecting all of the entries to he about being jealous. A message of gratitude makes me happy to read. Your writing is beautiful as well is your presentation. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this fantastic review and the shining stars. :)
Comment from Royette Dickenson
Great poem. It actually tells a story. It is something that many should be able to relate to. The aim today with everything going on is to get through.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Great poem. It actually tells a story. It is something that many should be able to relate to. The aim today with everything going on is to get through.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I agree, I'm just grateful for health and happiness with my family. Thank you for this excellent 6 star review. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Turn your back on jealousy and be grateful that you are alive and happy with the family; I love the turn of this poem " caused envy that cut deep and left me scars.
Jealousy's no longer present here in my life,
I've realized the worth of all the things I have,
I've found peace deep within, I've put behind strife,
it's for life, love, health, and family that I'm glad" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Turn your back on jealousy and be grateful that you are alive and happy with the family; I love the turn of this poem " caused envy that cut deep and left me scars.
Jealousy's no longer present here in my life,
I've realized the worth of all the things I have,
I've found peace deep within, I've put behind strife,
it's for life, love, health, and family that I'm glad" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and also for reviewing. I'm always open to any suggestions on improving it. :)
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the Jealousy Contest. You said a great deal and it is well written. We should all heed your words. Thanks for the strong message. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the Jealousy Contest. You said a great deal and it is well written. We should all heed your words. Thanks for the strong message. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
