The Bird Fancier
(75 words) Among the blossoms...12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, at least she was saved by the water! Cats use one of their nine lives when they go out on adventures such as these, I enjoyed your entertaining story here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Ha ha ha, at least she was saved by the water! Cats use one of their nine lives when they go out on adventures such as these, I enjoyed your entertaining story here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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She nearly died of embarrassment, so that was another life gone.
Comment from humpwhistle
An effective story told in the required seventy-five words.
Being that Flash Fiction is usually about building suspense for the twist or reveal at the end, I think you may give away too much, too soon with your title and descriptor line. Just an observation.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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An effective story told in the required seventy-five words.
Being that Flash Fiction is usually about building suspense for the twist or reveal at the end, I think you may give away too much, too soon with your title and descriptor line. Just an observation.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Good advice, thanks. I changed the title to "The Bird Fancier".
