Witness to a Kill
a 75-word20 total reviews
Comment from rockmann
When I can close my eyes and visualize what an author is writing about, that is the sign of a well written story. And the photo ties in with the story perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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When I can close my eyes and visualize what an author is writing about, that is the sign of a well written story. And the photo ties in with the story perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you, rockmann
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh, no kitty Galore in action, here goes the birdie in the paws of the kitty. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Oh, no kitty Galore in action, here goes the birdie in the paws of the kitty. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Iza
Comment from lyenochka
Oh that poor "seed dispenser!" Lol. I wonder if the kitten ever figured out that the pine cone was no match for him. This piece was beautifully written and the story was humorous. Happy to vote for this!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Oh that poor "seed dispenser!" Lol. I wonder if the kitten ever figured out that the pine cone was no match for him. This piece was beautifully written and the story was humorous. Happy to vote for this!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you, lyenochka.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written seventy five word flash fiction about the little kitten in our home often entertain us with their hunting skills. It is like watching a lion in the wild.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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A very well-written seventy five word flash fiction about the little kitten in our home often entertain us with their hunting skills. It is like watching a lion in the wild.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great (and cute image), Mystery Writer. Your contest entry was fun to read. You told this little kitty's story well in the allotted words. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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What a great (and cute image), Mystery Writer. Your contest entry was fun to read. You told this little kitty's story well in the allotted words. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from roof35
I really like your illustration which sets the stage for your words. This is a fun read and you followed all the rules. I especially like your title. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I really like your illustration which sets the stage for your words. This is a fun read and you followed all the rules. I especially like your title. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Roof
Comment from Ben B.
Just for the record the kitten's victim was a pine cone right? The target wasn't very clear at first. Still, this is a very cute and funny story. What exactly did you mean by "blue spruce" speed?
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Just for the record the kitten's victim was a pine cone right? The target wasn't very clear at first. Still, this is a very cute and funny story. What exactly did you mean by "blue spruce" speed?
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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The term was blue spruce seed dispenser which is a pine cone. : )
Comment from humpwhistle
Nicely done. I particularly enjoyed your careful word selections.
When one has only seventy five with which to work, each one
takes on added importance.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Nicely done. I particularly enjoyed your careful word selections.
When one has only seventy five with which to work, each one
takes on added importance.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Lee
Comment from equestrik
This is such a fun write and a great description of the antics of a kitten. They are so ferocious in their endeavors and so often their attempts at that fierceness are just hilarious. Super well written and fantastic picture!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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This is such a fun write and a great description of the antics of a kitten. They are so ferocious in their endeavors and so often their attempts at that fierceness are just hilarious. Super well written and fantastic picture!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you, equestrik
Comment from Nicholas T. Booker
Awesome story! it was a fun and visibly compelling ride.
my favorite line
Muscles visibly contracting, the coiled kitten springs forward onto the unsuspecting and slow-responding pine cone.
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Awesome story! it was a fun and visibly compelling ride.
my favorite line
Muscles visibly contracting, the coiled kitten springs forward onto the unsuspecting and slow-responding pine cone.
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Nicholas
