Morning Kiss
5-7-5 Poem entry21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the rough night if storms until the dark waters get kissed by the morning sunlight to reflect a new path.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the rough night if storms until the dark waters get kissed by the morning sunlight to reflect a new path.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this one!
Comment from Sally Law
And the same thing applies in life if we take the time to look. A fine poem and double meaning here that runs deep. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest, dear June.
Sally XOs....
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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And the same thing applies in life if we take the time to look. A fine poem and double meaning here that runs deep. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest, dear June.
Sally XOs....
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am happy this piece resonated with you. Thank you for taking the time to read share your thoughts!
Comment from Cindy Decker
June,
I'm thinking you can take this poem literally, as is, or you can use these words symbolically. After a time of trial in life, the sun's light is God's light guiding the narrator on another path. Excellent work, June.
A sweet poem of hope.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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June,
I'm thinking you can take this poem literally, as is, or you can use these words symbolically. After a time of trial in life, the sun's light is God's light guiding the narrator on another path. Excellent work, June.
A sweet poem of hope.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
Comment from royowen
I love the dawn of beginnings and the mercy and a new day, and God communicates His exuberance. Until day's decline, and another celebration, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I love the dawn of beginnings and the mercy and a new day, and God communicates His exuberance. Until day's decline, and another celebration, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I am glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
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Well done
Comment from Tina Crute
This appears such an artistic rendering that I didnt expect the words to be as beautiful as the picture. But I was wrong. Your words make me imagine how the water must feel. It's happy for a fresh new day. The sun is shining and the past has gone and a new path is ready to be trod. This is lovely:)
Tina
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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This appears such an artistic rendering that I didnt expect the words to be as beautiful as the picture. But I was wrong. Your words make me imagine how the water must feel. It's happy for a fresh new day. The sun is shining and the past has gone and a new path is ready to be trod. This is lovely:)
Tina
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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You got exactly the point I was making! Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
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Cool! You're welcome. Loved it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
After the storm passes, we see life differently and can make decisions with a clear head, I like the metaphor here June, a clever 5-7-5, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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After the storm passes, we see life differently and can make decisions with a clear head, I like the metaphor here June, a clever 5-7-5, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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You got exactly the point I was making! Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Comment from Debra White
Hello June,
I really like your haiku. The imagery is beautiful. The truth in nature is reflected in human nature as everything really does seem so much better in the light of a new day.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Hello June,
I really like your haiku. The imagery is beautiful. The truth in nature is reflected in human nature as everything really does seem so much better in the light of a new day.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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You got exactly the point I was making! Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Comment from zanya
A duality of emotions touched upon here and so effectively in this very short format of the 5-7-5 -language reflecting the theme 'kissed by sunlight' and 'rough night '
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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A duality of emotions touched upon here and so effectively in this very short format of the 5-7-5 -language reflecting the theme 'kissed by sunlight' and 'rough night '
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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You got exactly the point I was making! Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a beautiful entry in that 5-7-5 poetry contest. A superb creative imagery and visuals. Nice use of enjambment. Superb artistic presentation and artwork.
I wish you luck in the contest; I am sure this will do very well.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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What a beautiful entry in that 5-7-5 poetry contest. A superb creative imagery and visuals. Nice use of enjambment. Superb artistic presentation and artwork.
I wish you luck in the contest; I am sure this will do very well.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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You got exactly the point I was making! Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, June.
-Good syllable count
and topic, along with
the imagery and rhyme.
-You also paint a
vivid word picture
with only a few words.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation, June.
-Good syllable count
and topic, along with
the imagery and rhyme.
-You also paint a
vivid word picture
with only a few words.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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You got exactly the point I was making! Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
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You are welcome, and I appreciate your reply!
