Morning Kiss
5-7-5 Poem entry21 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello June,
I pray you are doing well during this pandemic and chaos in our world. You used such a beautiful photo of calm and God's creation, the awesome ocean. I like your 5-7-5 poem for the Morning Kiss. Your three lines are very powerful in it's tone and message. This is such a lovely line, "dark waters kissed by sunlight reflects a new path." Nicely written. Happy future writing:-) Thanks
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Hello June,
I pray you are doing well during this pandemic and chaos in our world. You used such a beautiful photo of calm and God's creation, the awesome ocean. I like your 5-7-5 poem for the Morning Kiss. Your three lines are very powerful in it's tone and message. This is such a lovely line, "dark waters kissed by sunlight reflects a new path." Nicely written. Happy future writing:-) Thanks
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your positive and insightful feedback!
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Thank for writing your lovely poem.
