Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Yes you have a complete story with start and finish. Here is the course run Forest, run! The final stride: "
Photo finish. I won by a nose!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Thank you for reviewing ?Schnoz,? Iza. I am delighted you found it to be a ?complete? story.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading this. It's funny, well told and has a start, middle and end - not easily achieved with such a small allowance of words!
Well done and good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for reviewing my short story, Debra. I am so pleased you found it funny.

Comment from Jacob David Collins

Excellent

I enjoyed this and I thought it was really engaging from start to finish. Names can definitely seem to stick, I did have to look up the word schnoz after I read the your writing. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

I don?t think ?schnoz? is used as much today as it was back in the day. Do you remember Jimmy Durante? That?s what they called him because of his nose. Many thanks for reviewing my story, Jacob.

reply by Jacob David Collins on 27-Aug-2020

No I don't I'm afraid, it was probably something before my time. I was born in 1995.

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Jimmy was a comedian. You might be able to see him on You Tube.